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i lov lov lov d nanny storey...❤️❤️❤️❤️ tq 

Hi

Hey there! 
          
          If you're accepting reading requests, I would love it if you give my book a try. It's a rom-com Desi romance with an enemies-to-lovers troupe.
          
          Here is the link. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/351559766?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Zivera_17&wp_originator=kdn0TLC3QlJISBi5YRGZ5f0wZov6wh7%2FH0D%2B6BK8fwCVgLeD07jCbjDqJFoGKVjkhFbR2sJIKjSlsg7IxA%2BHb3%2FYw%2B85ZSu5zPs%2FKc8MqUSH%2FrC3PEisnwEZRxi8a0z8
          
          My apologies if I disturbed you!  

Hi love are you still going to continue to finish his hacker? 

MY GOD BEEN LOOKING FOR THIS NANNY BOOK FOR A LONG TIME OUF I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHFJEHWFJVD

Hi I just finished reading Nanny and it was greatly enjoyed it. It was very well written story. 
          Only things I’d comment on were just a few holes and loose ends in the storyline that perhaps you could consider if wanting to improve upon the storyline and help expel some lingering questions for the reader. 
          I did feel as though the story abruptly was finished off. There was quite a bit of self talk about him desperate to make her his. And as a couple they had just taken things to an intimate level when suddenly there is the 20yr time leap. I expected to read about how he finally proposed and about the wedding. I think the large time leap may have felt much smoother after the wedding. 
          The other missing piece was her dream of owning a bakery. Her character came across as a very determined, independent and driven woman. Realistically it seems hard to think she’d just let that go, no matter if she was wife to a Don. I expected a really interesting and creative twist as to how she was able to have her legitimate business whilst dealing with unique issues of being associated as family to a Don like how they provided constant safety without suspicion to public etc. In the beginning there was a lot of emphasis on her work at that little bakery and her relationship (seeming family-like) with the owner. So it seemed odd with no mention as to how she broached quilting  and Thought eventually maybe she would buy and expand the bakery on his retirement. Juggling all her responsibilities could lead to very entertaining scenarios. 
          Also with so much emphasis on how close she was to her best friend, who just seemed to suddenly disappear all together from the story and her life (seemed unrealistic to not seek support with her emotions and relationship development). 
          Well Done though, you definitely have talent as a creative writer.  Hope to read more from you in the future. 

Hi pls update 

Hi I was wondering when will you be updating His Hacker again? Hope everything is okay. 

Honestly, I kinda want to work on another, nannyXsingle dad book again. I know I have to finish “His Hacker” but ‍♀️

His when you going to update His hacker