Hey author, your this book is fabulous, you know,
this whole book I have read around 10 times,
and what is the interesting part? I even remember
most of the dialogue of this book .
Okay, now jokes apart, I have an idea for you.
Like this part, can we explore the past of the siblings
when Jin first punished himself because he was not
able to protect his Aera, and Jimin got to know about
that because of this, and Jimin is stressed this time also.
Jimin got to know about this when he went to surprise
his noona and wanted to spend some time with her
so that she feels safe and happy. But at the door,
he saw his noona applying ointment on his bruises,
and Jimin left from there because he got to know that
his hyung is punishing himself again.
He was not able to tolerate that his hyung is punishing
himself, and he told everything to his rest of the siblings.
They were very sad and angry; then Jungkook remembered
his sister's words that Jin oppa is not fine.
They were asking him, "Why did you do this, hyung?"
Then Jin asked them to remember the first incident
that happened with Aera when she was around 10 years old.
A lot happened, and they went to an amusement park.
There, in the wash, some women trapped her and
were touching her, saying bad words.
She got to know that this is not good; she hurriedly
ran out of the washroom and went to her oppas.
Jin took a pledge to punish himself if it happens again.
Their eyes were teary; they didn't remember the incident.
Aera saw Jin's wounds and cried; Jin consoled her.
She asked for a promise that he won't hurt himself.
You can take this as a gist of the story, and with
your writing skills, it'll be amazing. I'll be on the
ninth cloud if you like this idea.