Are you still doing critiquing? ♡ if so I will leave my form here, if not, just ignore and let me know ASAP. Thank you!
@TheFaeryKing
Title: Polaroid Girl
Genre: Short Story
# of chapters: 10. You said your maximum was 9, but two of my chapters are very short (they take under 30 seconds to read, and you shouldn't even have to scroll.) So I wondered if you would still accept? Thank you!
Focus on?: Sorry structure, plot, sentence arrangement, a little bit of grammar, characters and their development, overall story in general.
Delivery?: Whichever is more comfortable for you. If in the direct messages, you can be brutally honest, but in the comments, don't sugar coat, but be a little nicer please ♡ thank you so much! Lots of love~