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(MAFIA HEIR SERIES BOOK 1!!)
Lillian Gold, daughter of the Mafia queen, has no recollection of who her father was, or is. Her life, is far from normal. From the age of 3 she was told her father had passed away. They had a...
Hey guys I've never wrote a full story before and I hope you guys like this one. Feel free to leave comments or ideas and ways to improve my writing! I'll be writing this as you guys read so I might even take some suggestions into consideration!
At the end of each chapter I would love for you guys to guess what you think is gonna happen next! This is all original and not copy written. I apologize in advance for misspelling anything. I will try and go back and edit it I see anything.
EVERYTHING IS EDITED SO THE COMMENTS ARE NOT THERE ANYMORE
This is the edited Version of deal! Hope it's better then the first. Lol
Disclaimer!!! The first 10 chapters are old chapters with new edited versions in them so if you see any old comments or they've dispersed that's why. Also, any other languages I used in this I got from Google translate so I'm aware some of it might not be right. _____________________________
Description: Lillian Gold, daughter of the Mafia queen, has no recollection of who her father was, or is. She has a far away from normal life. From the age of 3 she was told her father had passed away. They had a funeral and all, only, Lily has no memory of that.
From the age of 13 her mom turned inside out, becoming the monster everyone believed her to be. She trained Lily to fight, to kill, and best of all, hold back emotions. Don't get attached. In the end it's always been business, she was always put on the second tier of her mothers cake.
Lily doesn't want this life, she never has. She's wanted a normal family, kids, and a husband. She doesn't want to be her mother. Not everyone gets what they want though, do they.
Greyson Smith, son of the Mafia king, crime lord, what ever you want to call it, has a decent life going for him. He's in line to be the next big boss. He'll be taking over for his dad sone enough, and he's more than ready for it. He's got the grades, the ladies, and the signature title of school bad boy.
The only thing he's had to do was keep himself un-noticed, and follow orders. So when he gets orders from his dad to keep a close eye on Lily, he has no other choose but to follow through. Greyson has always been good at keeping his emotions locked up somewhere deep inside him. Somewhere no one can reach. Well, that is, until he mets Lily.
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Trigger Warning: -abuse -panic attack -mature language -death/killing -sexual content
Please do not leave mean comments towards me or the characters.
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Thank you guys for 5K reads!! I can't. AHH. (April 8 22)
Now 7k! Literally my fav people! (May 3 22)
Thanks for 8k! I'm so thankful guys!!(August 19th 2022)
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NEW NEWS- I'm rewriting it so please be patient with the posting! I've been occupied with school and my other book but testing is done so hopefully I'll start writing more!(May 18th 2022) FYI I'm not putting TW on the chapters anymore. I think it spoils it. Unless it's really really bad I'll put a little heads up.
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Tropes in this book: - Guy saves girl - Family Rivals to Lovers - Enemies to Lovers - Forced Proximity - Guy falls first - Dark Past
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Important Dates: Started- December 18th 2021 Finished writing- February 4th 2022 Fully posted- February 8th 2022 Fully edited-
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Character Aesthetic
Main characters:
Lillian Avele Gold Italian 5'4 17 Short orange hair, with one eye green and one eye blue. You can imagine differently if you'd like!
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Grayson Antonio Smith Italian 6'0 18 Brown hair, and hazel eyes but you can imagine differently if you'd like!
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Side characters:
James Sherbert -Italian -5'9 -18 -Green eyes -Black hair -darker skin -Graysons bestfriend -partier/fun one
