I have decided to completely re-write this horrid, crappy fan fiction
It completely sucks and I hate it with every fiber of my being. This fan fiction is awful
The timeline doesn't add up, there was way to many casual kidnappings, stale plots, dumb villains, and I made sweet Dylan a bad guy
I'm currently in the process of re-writing it and (hopefully) my lazy ass will continue to rewrite it and if I had to guess the new rewritten version will be up in two months
The writing will be better, I swear
It won't be AS cringey
Dylan won't be a bad guy
All the couples will have reasonable bumps in their relationship instead of all the bullshit ones I made up
Couples:
Eric and Lizzie (obviously)
Tyler and Dylan
Gina and Chote
All the couples go through a hard time because the girls can't emotionally be there for them because of stuff their dealing with themselves
It will be up soon I'm trying to work on it every day. In comparison I think it's better
If you've read stuff I've made before I know I tend to make empty promises but I'm really trying to actually finish and re-write this awful fan fiction I swear
YOU ARE READING
Malibu rescue
FanfictionNew year new summer New relationships crazy captains ok a LOT of crazy captains some kidnappings and one sided love add a pinch of crazy ness and some kids who are bored and you got the best summer ever
