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The day... The day ..when Marianna didn't get her gift .. people started seeing her... Differently. Even her abuela. She only cares about the special kids. Not the giftless ones it was a normal day at encanto Marianna was now 17! She was turning 18 in a few weeks but something about her seems off. Her family caught her doing something suspicious or sometimes the knife at the counter goes missing everyday. Marianna was not happy. Like before she used to be joyful. But now she seems like emotionless but they saw her every night staring at someone at the lake she seems like she ever saw someone who made her happy her whole life.. the next day they were all confused cause Marianna didn't wake them all up. They always knew she was on that lake all day staring at something invisible so they all started to investigate what's happening to Marianna so they decided to follow her all day the ones are gonna follow her at day are Carlos,Isabela,Antonio the ones are gonna follow her at night are Dolores,Luisa,Carlos. Abuela told the whole town that they were gonna need a whole week to take a break luckily the whole town agreed. The next day went by Carlos Isabela Antonio followed Marianna
I: I don't get it what's wrong with her?
C: I don't know ask your self.
I: EXCUSE ME?!
A: guys please don't fight I'm telling my animals to find her too
They both agreed after hours walking they finally saw Marianna standing and doing nothing at the lake she was staring at something but when they looked up they saw a cave a big cave they all decided to follow Marianna on it. But they saw a big monster who has no eyes but all bloody. They all go quite and hided and they heard Marianna talking to it.
M: are you hungry?
The monster nodded.
M: here have some of my blood.
Marianna pulled a knife out of her wallet and cutted her self and let the blood dip on the bowl of the monster.
After doing that Marianna finally feed it.
M: here you go sorry it took so long and I'm finally feeling light headed bye Max! Have fun!
Marianna left the cave
Carlos and isabela, Antonio were staring at it how it drink it
I: what... It even has a name...
ISABELA said while they're walking home.
A: brother.. I'm scared.
Antonio said with a cry face.
C: shhh.... It's going to be okay.
Carlos said while letting his brother cry in his shoulder while they got back julieta asked what happened after isabela explained Marianna came home with an blank face and lay down on her bed resting before feeding the monster once again.
J:Alright its night time.Dolores,Luisa,Carlos it's time to  go.
Julieta said they waited Marianna to leave again and they followed her again but today was different Marianna killed a girl. And let the blood spill on the blood it was traumatizing while they saw Marianna kill someone with a blank face. But they have to be quite and they saw the monster getting big and big.
M: here you go max...
Marianna petted the monster
M: well just have to wait until it's the right time.
Marianna left when they came home Marianna rushed to the bathroom to shower and remove the evidence. As the 3 came home julieta asked what happened again. When Luisa said it to the whole family the whole family when on shock but abuela said
A: this has to stop we need to evacuate right now and wake up the people! While they were on a meeting Marianna spyid on them and realeased max.
M: are you ready max?
Max nodded. So max growled to everyone hear.
Back at the casita. They all noticed Dolores wasn't speaking so they asked her what was wrong
D: it's the monster...s-she realeased it right now I heard a growl....
Everyone panicked abuela pepa helped julieta make arepas and all the fathers are building a safe place then all the kids hurried to knock on everyone's doors and go to the casita immediately then they all saw the big big monster beside Marianna smiling.. when they were all on the casita, casita made sure the candle is safe so they cannot loose they're gifts
Abuela told everyone to stay silent so the monster can't hear them casita was getting distracted because some guy got stuck but when casita came back the candle was gone. They all finded it but then Marianna said on the top of the roof said
M: looking for this?
Marianna said with a smirk
J: MARIANNA STOP THIS RIGHT NOW!
julieta said to her daughter with an angry tone 
M: isn't this all you wanted abuela? When you all people thought I didn't have a gift I actually have all of you started calling me "useless""family's burden" and alot of things. Abuela only cared about the gifted ones. And not me am I really not that special?
Suddenly the monster appeard on Marianna's back
M: I guess this will be you guys worst nightmare goodluck! Oh and wait! If you think I only have 1 of them?  actually have 5 of them they're all the same height so yeah bye!
Everyone prepared to attack monster Carlos target was Marianna to stop her meanwhile Marianna was watching them fight while she has a gun pointed at her head she loaded 6 bullets. And wanting to play Russian roulette. The monsters were attacking some hours passed by 30 people died. Mariannas monsters were dead so they have to fight Marianna the wife of the dead husband wanted to fight Marianna but Marianna made her head explode someone was trying to make Marianna smell something but Marianna stopped the guy on time and pointed a gun on him Marianna loaded 2 bullets then pointed it on the guys head and shooted him 2 times the guy were dead and the marigals were the only one left
M: you guys are lucky I didn't break the candle..

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⏰ Last updated: May 19, 2022 ⏰

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