🌌CHAL WAHA JATE HAI🌌 OS Sumod 😁😁

part 1

Hi guys,

So, firstly special thanks to
@goofballs_sumod
for a beautiful cover

Let's start
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Scene starts from angan.

Two Lil cute girls are playing with ball with a man. A young pregnent woman sitting on chair.
After some time a man comes with samose. and back to him a lady also comes with juice.

Ya, these two cute girls are garima and Susheela playing with dharampal. And the pregnant women is chanchal chachi.
And the rest u have already guessed.
They are chachaji and kusum.

Everything is going as daily happens. But it's the starting of destruction.

Suddenly, dharampal smells something weird. Like burning 🔥.

Dp- na shishu kuch jalne ki bu aa rahi hai. Kuch gas pe rakha hai ke.
C- na, bhaisahab gas pe kuch na rakha. Ap kahe to dekh ke aa jau
Dp- tu ruk me dekh ke ata hu.
C-nai,bhaisahab mere hote ap kam kyu karenge.
Cc-(In mind) into to sirf apne bhaisahab ki hi padi hai. Ider ek sunder si pregnant ladki bhuki bethi hai Aur inhe dekho.
Mujhe hi kuch karna padega.
Cc- vo gas ka bhaisahab dekh lenge, ap mujhe juice de dijiye mujhse to ab khada bhi nai hua ja raha(full dramatically)
Dp- thik hi keh rahi hai chanchal tu ruk yehi me jake dekh ata hu.

Dp goes in kitchen.

Suddenly girl sees smoke

G- mummy chua(dhua)
K- chuha kaha hai chuha.
G- nai mummy Chua(chuha) ni chua(dhua)
S- ha mummy chua(dhua)
Pointing towards smoke
K-(screams) dhua
C- ke hua bhabhi
S- cha...cha
Holding his pant
C- ke chaiye meri pyari si bhatiji ko
S- chua(dhua)
C- chuha(shocked). Chuha kisliye chahiye.
From down
G-cha...cha
Chua(chuha) ni chua(dhua)
K- shishu, vo dhua bol rahi hai
S and G - aa(ha)
C- dhua(confusing)
Kaha
Kusum points toward smoke
C- DHUA..

from back
Dp- shishu, sabse bahar Nikal ghar me aa lag gai hai
C-ke?kese?
Dp- vo pata nai bus abhi sabko bahar Nikal

Chanchal hears it
Cc- aa... bachao koi.
Everyone run towards chanchal except garima and Susheela.

K- ke hua chanchal chill kyu rahi hai
Cc- jiji vo aa.
Point toward house where fire has increased very much.

Scene shift toward garima Susheela
They saw small 🔥

S- galima(garima) dek aag
G- aa(ha), chal iche(ise) bujate hai, Hume chabachi(shabashi) milegi
S- aa(ha), chal jaldi

They go towards tap and open it take little water in there hand and go towards there little fire
But before they reach water gets vanished

S- galima(garima) ye to aag tak pochne che(se) pele(pehle) hi katam(khatam) ho gaya. Ab
G- chochne(sochne) de
iea(idea)
S- kya? Chaldi(jaldi) bacha(bata)
G- bacha(bata) ni dek(dekh)

She take big leaf. Fold it and then pour water in it.
And take near fire and unfold leaf

S- ye.. aag buj gai
G- chal mummy ko batati hai.
S- aul(Aur) chabachi(shabashi) late hai
G- aa. Chal jaldi

They go near kusum and say
S- mumma amne(hamne)...
Cuts her sentence
G- amne(humne) ni mene
S-nai amne
K-are par kya
G-mene aag buja di
S- mene ni amne(humne)
C

-are par konsi aag.

S-vo jo va ti
G- mummy! ame chabachi nai dogi.
K- achha baba ye lo tumhari shabashi
G&S- ye ame(hume) chabachi(shabashi) mil gai.
K- ha baba ab waha dur khada raho aur yaha mat Ana
G&S- ok👍

They go and play with ball.
And then

Aj ke liye bas itna hi😝
Agle part tak wait karo

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