Well hello I'm the writer and thx for taking a look at my story, it is probably poorly written so tell me if there's any spelling errors please
Max was in his room impatiently waiting for his father to arrive back from his two week business, sure some can argue that leaving a 15 year old home alone for that long is extremely wrong, but Max didn't mind it, in fact he loved being alone sure he got lonely at times but he's Father's friend Janey would come visit and bring food from time to time, he came yesterday in fact and brought pizza, when he heard a knock at the door, he surly thought it was his father, sure it was weird he came back a day early "maybe his flight was a day earlier then I thought it was, surely that's it" he thought to him self when he opened the door he didn't expect a cop would be waiting at the other side, Max was confused he was sure there were no law about leaving a 15 year old brown haired kid alone at home,
"hello, you James rock's kid?" The cop spoke in a gruff voice that rattled in Max's head.
"Yeah that's m-me" he stuttered, wondering why this cop was asking about his father.
"Well you see here kid," the officer started to speak
"your father Died two days ago"
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AdventureMax was a living alone with his dad, and when his dad randomly disappeared, he had to go live with his dad's friend, Janey who mysteriously leaves to house every night. But when Max finds that he's part goat, Him and Janey set take to find Max's Fat...
