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I'll be writing a couple stories here on wattpad this is just to promote a book or share a potential idea Here you'll be able to share your honest thoughts on it (No hate pls) and a couple ideas and things you'd like to read 😊 Please take a little...

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przez booker400

autorstwa @booker400

Hi Hi Hi

This isn't a story instead this is where I'd ask for feedback/advice and maybe promote a book I'm working on because I've got a few ideas.

So lately I've been writing a mafia story , i published this on wattpad before but i discontinued it and took it down because I wasn't able to execute correctly it constantly had plot holes 😅 I didn't like the direction it was going in and I had no clear vision for it, so basically I was winging it

But after taking some time to properly plan it and think the chapters through I'm ready to bring it back , some people (like very few people) might know it as pain or the pain , but I've changed the title , the backstories , timeline and even introduced a couple new charecters all in all I think I've drastically improved so tell me....

Would you read a story about...
A mafia family who struggles with their own problems like struggling with self love , trauma , sexuality , mental health and falling in love , maybe even forbidden romance.

A mafia family who struggles with their own problems like struggling with self love , trauma , sexuality , mental health and falling in love , maybe even forbidden romance — Ups! Ten obraz nie jest zgodny z naszymi wytycznymi. Aby kontynuować, spróbuj go usunąć lub użyć innego.

*these are the charecter aestethics combined but I'll probably add more"

Ups! Ten obraz nie jest zgodny z naszymi wytycznymi. Aby kontynuować, spróbuj go usunąć lub użyć innego.

And these are a couple cover ideas don't mind the first one I'm still looking for the perfect title i was just testing it out but it's not finalized yet

Let me know if I should start to publish this book and if so which cover should I pick 🤔 and if you would like to know more

Thanks for taking the time to read this I really appreciate it and I would appreciate if you commented your thoughts
Thanks again ❤💙💜