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first story;; pressure's on. critique, constructive criticism, everything is appreciated. c:

I thought I'd do something simple for my first piece of work - it's not very pretty. But it'll do. :3

With the slightest ‘click’ you can capture the essence of living. You can find one’s darkest moments or one’s crystal clear beauty. You can see the blossom of true love unfurling or see it slowly withering away. With the slightest ‘click’ you can explore people’s thoughts and ideas, without saying anything at all. You can feel colours bursting, tears burning or sadness weighing them down. Sense a reckless freedom or a glowing ecstasy within.  With the slightest ‘click’ you can capture the perfect moment.  With the slightest ‘click’ you can capture her. Eyes swirled chocolate with the shiny depths of the seabed. Luminous skin glowing, her soft sculpted lips stretched softly into place illuminating her cheekbones and leaving them rosy pink. The Camera capturing her external beauty better than anything, but my heart captured her internal beauty. And it was truly beautiful. It was soft, caring and full of love.