The Planned Affair (Revised)

This is the revised and improved version of The Planned Affair. 

Pls share your thoughts on the story! Love to hear what you think and how I can improve it.

Thanks for reading in advance, hope you enjoy my first novel :)

Blurb:

There is no doubt that Becky Fletcher lives a picture-perfect life. Married to a multi-millionaire who adores her  and attends to her every wants, Becky has the best of both worlds- a lifestyle of glamour, wealth and luxuries and the fortune of being loved.

Yet, even though her husband's money was more than enough, his love was not. 

So when Becky falls in love with Marcello, a handsome, young Italian waiter, she knows that leaving her husband will mean kissing goodbye to the extravagant lifestyle she has become so dearly accustomed to.

However, an unexpected visit from Becky’s estranged no-good father and beautiful, older sister, ignites Becky with a cunning yet heartless plan, that may just enable her to have her cake and eat it too…