the celing of stars (1)

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this is my second work!!!

please enjoy and comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! X3

-balckneko

the celing of stars

someone's pov (dont worry u will know very soon)

she was my everything, no it should be is;

she is my everything; she is my light;

she is my little white angel;

she is my bright shinning star in my lonely black;

she is an idiot, oh and of course very stuborn, clamzy and childish too;

she is my younger half-sister;

she is our mom's illegel and unwanted daughter;

she is left to me alone to care for;

she is grown up without the care and love of parents;

she is blind but she is the only reason i live to now and also she is my first, last and only love.

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'brother!' she shouted witha great big smille, kicked the blanket that was covering her with her good leg then ran/limp over feeling around to find me, i grabbed her wraist and then she hugged my waist like a kowala (me: no, shes not 10! she's just short thats all, really short) i raised my hand, patted her head and ran her short black hair through my hand

'you came!' she screamed tilt her head up with her clouded blue eyes that i hated for brining her into this situation and yet so beautiful

'yes, i did. didnt i tell u yesturday i can visit u today.'

'but u always hav some emergency work and hav to leave so soon...' she mummbled under her breath with her face buried into me.

'Hoshiko! ur not respoes to get up.' warned the nurse who came in with a bowl of two apple and a fruit knife.

'sorry' with that hoshiko walked/limped back with the help of the nurse after the nurse put the bowl and fruite knife.

'im sorry, megumi. dont get mad at me please???' and pouted like a puupy wanting a bacon treat (megumi is the nurse's name)

'atlongs u be quiet, i can hear in the kitchen.'

'yay!!!' she shouted with a childish smille on her face

'shh.'

'sorry again.'

'mr. tsutano hibki.' i turned to find hoshikos doctor at the door, he motioned his hand to go with him, i did.

outside in the hallway

'mr. tsutano. the deadline of 3.5 blillion hostipal bill is due the end of the month' 'i cant make any farther declines.'

'i know.' i said in a emotiionless

then he said something unexpected

'u know u can always go find ur father and ask for his help.'

i begin to feel heat rushing to my face and crunched my hands into fists, let it go, hibiki, let it go, i told myself mentally trying to calm my nerves

'im sure he will gladly take u in but for hoshiko... maybe u should put her in a orphrange and im sure some good family will-"

that did it

i punched him, thats right, i puched the doctor "sightly" at his right cheek and in to the wall,only bruising it "a little".

' im sorry dcotor, i saw a big miskito buzzing around.' and then i flashed one of my "smille" at him and left, leaving the pale-white doctor forzen in one place looking hes gonna pee in his pants and scream mama.

yes, hoshiko is my little sister, no better yet, my half-sister. who is currently only 14, never gone to school, never had friends, never had the experience of having parents but still she smilles brightly everyday like she just found a lucky penny, and the reason why shes blind? no she didnt get from birth, she got form when our mother tried to kill her when she was just a toddler. why, yes, i still remmeber that past, no that nightmare very clear and too clear to forget.

so do u like it its the first chap

please leave some advice and comment

srry its short

ill make it longer next time

at the next chap u will find out how did hoshiko get blind, why did their mother tried to kill her, why did hibiki punched the doctor and how does hibki raised the money!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! COMING SOON!!!!

-blackneko

ps hoshiko means star child and hibiki means echoes

pss tsutano is their last name

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