۔I am in a car park in Leeds when I tell my husband I don't want to be married to him anymore. David isn't even in the car park with me. He's at home, looking after the kids, and I have only called him to remind him that he should write a note for M...
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One of the biggest bugaboos in manuscript submissions is when the author doesn't properly introduce the protagonist within the first chapter. Readers want to know quickly the protagonist's sex, age and level of sophistication in the world of the story, and they want to relate to the character on an emotional level. Readers' interest in the protagonist has to be earned, in other words.
If we like a character, then we want to see her do well and we're willing to follow her around and invest our time and interest in rooting her on in her struggle. But it's important we know some essentials about the character so we can get to like her. The trick is to avoid stand-alone description or exposition and to instead show your character in action.
This guest post is by Les Edgerton, author of fifteen books, including two about writing fiction: (Writer's Digest Books) and (Writer's Digest Books). He also writes short stories, articles, essays, novels, and screenplays. Follow him on Twitter .
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