chapter 1

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hija wake up you're going to be late for your first day of high school.
mom okay let me get ready .
okay mija hurry up tho.
okay mom I'm ready for school.
good luck and see you afterschool.
thanks mom.
you had to walk to school, and you were late cause when you got there Mrs. Perez  told you "maria late on your first day ?" you replied "I'm sorry Mrs.Perez" she said you couldn't go in and then a cute boy walked in . "Mr.Coronel why are you late " he said "I'm sorry I missed the bus" she told him I can't let you in either with her bitchy attitude. he said "hi I'm luis " you said "hi I'm maria " he smiled at you and his dimple showed. you smiled back, your dimples showed and he poked them . you blushed and he kept smiling. he said that you were really pretty. you said thanks. he said "do you want to go get some Starbucks? " you said sure . you guys walked cause it wasn't that far away. you got the vanilla bean . and he got the same. The girl you hated saw you walked up to you guys wrote her number on Luis's hand and told you to back off. then she walked away. Luis saw that your eyes were watery and that you were hurt. he erased her number of his hand and asked if you were okay . you said no sorry I have to go luis . he said bye. you ran home crying . when you arrived home your mom saw you crying and said hija que paso? you told her what happened she said just ignore her she's a slut. you said okay hugged her and said that you felt sick. so she went to go make you some chicken soup. you went on instagram and saw that luis posted a picture of you two when you were at Starbucks. the caption said at Starbucks with my new friend Maria. there was comments saying are they going out ? he found your instagram and requested to follow you. you accepted . you had a message in instagram it was from luis he said why did you leave . you said cause daisy ruined it. he said I don't care about daisy I like you not daisy. you were shocked because you thought luis didn't feel the same way but he did. you said you had to go. he said bye Hermosa. you said bye. at dinner your mom said that if you still felt sick cause she had to work tomorrow. you said its okay that you could stay alone.
*the next day* you woke up and saw that your mom had already left. luis noticed that you hadn't been at school that day so he went to your house. you answered the door 'hello' he said why didn't you go to school. you said that you were sick. he said pobresista and gave you a hug. you hugged him back. he told you about his singing career and you said if he would sing mi niña traviesa to you. he said yes only because you're sick. he started singing. mi niña traviesa tu eres mi princesa hermosa sonrisa mirada coceta mi niña traviesa te quiero desirte que si no to miro me poco muy triste mi niña traviesa tengo la sospecha de que seras par me me trais de cabeza. after he was done signing you were telling him his voice was amazing . he said gracias and sorry I have to go. you said bye. when we left two hours later your mom came back. you were really happy and she asked why. you said cause your friend came over. she said como se llama . you said luis. she said so tu dia paso bien ? tu dijiste que si y la de ella . dijo que bien. it was late so you had to go to bed. you heard a knock on your window it was luis he threw a rock at your window and said to come he had to tell you something. you went and said what is it. he said he was in love with you and that he couldn't be away from you unless you would be his niña traviesa and his novia. you said omg si luissorry its my first chapter and my first story I know its bad :(

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⏰ Laatst bijgewerkt: Jul 24, 2014 ⏰

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