How I Rose To The Top

In The Beggining

In the beginning there was nothing, then god said "Let there be light" and it was good.

3rd Person

As Izuku slowly woke up he was filled with excitement. It was the quirk testing day! He could finally be cool like Kacchan, but unknown to him, wishes became reality.

Arriving at the Hospital they immediately saw dozens of kids, at least 15. Most of them seemed pretty normal, as normal as a world where quirks exist anyway. There was a girl with yellow hair and a black streak down the front, she was playing with a girl with short brown hair and brown eyes.

Nothing seemed out of the normal until he noticed the lonely girl sitting with a giant of a a man. The girl had interesting hair, reaching down to her lower back it was red on one half and white down the other. She was gorgeous to say the least. Izuku was about to do something but the quirk doctor ( is there a special name??) called for him.

1st Person
As I entered the doctors office I noticed a very stressed look on his face, it was like he'd seen a ghost! I started to get worried ' What if Kacchan doesn't like me cause I don't have a quirk?'. I started to have a nervous breakdown, but then the doctor spoke up.

"Inko is it? Your son does indeed have a quirk"

A wave of relief showered over me, all the bad thoughts just blowing way.

"There are times where the child does not take after the parent quirk wise. This is one of those times"

I was in shock after hearing that, I mean anyone would be!

"Your sons quirk allows him to be freed from any restrictions. He can basically do anything he desires from killing everyone to making a new universe"

I was pretty much speechless, I could do anything that was impossible and possible! Just then I realised what I could say.

" YAY! MUM MUM DOES THIS MEAN I COULD BE LIKE DAD?"

"Yes Izuku you can become a hero, just like all might."

I new from them on out that I Izuku Midoriya to be like All Might the next symbol of peace.

Leaving his office I noticed that all of the kids were gone. All but one girl. The white and red headed goddess. But as I looked closer I noticed their grief stricken. I walked up to them trying to help but, after I read what was on the document I realised the problem.

Enji Todoroki
'After overuse of your quirk for so many years you have developed a tumour. We are unsure how much longer you will live, but it is likely for only a few more days.'

I was lost for words. The man in front of me was going die, and I couldn't do anything. Suddenly he fell over clutching his chest in immense pain. I felt the mans chest.

There was no pulse.

I didn't notice before but the girl was smothering her face into my jacket while crying immensely.

I knew all I could do was hold her, and that's what I did.

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