Holding On (A Beth and Daryl Fan fiction)

Chapter 1

(Daryl's P.O.V)

I ran towards the woods trying not to think about what just happened. It was a normal day at the prison and then this huge tank showed up at our door. It was the Governor trying to kill all of us to take the prison. There was an brawl between Rick and the Governor. We lost many people today and now our whole group is split up. Just when I stated to get use to people this had to happen, but out of all the people I've gotten use to like Rick or Michonne the only person I'm really worried about is Beth. Yes I know what you are thinking "The loner redneck with the cute farmers daughter, that will never work out." We have grown to become real close friends over the last few months in this deadly world we live in. I'm now in the forest where I just run and try to mask my emotions until I see something that makes me even more upset, it's Beth's jacket. I quickly pick it up and run until I'm out of breath, I sit down near a secluded tree and rest for a moment

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