Naira's confession

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Naira has already decided to inform kartik about her feelings during the karva chauth celebration at singhania sadan .
Naitik has called kartik to home for some work ,naira is happy and eagerly waiting for kartik.
when kartik comes he notices little shyness in naira but he ignores as he has  no hopes left because after getting no reply from naira  even after so many days of his confession he has  started feeling that naira doesn't love him.
Kartik is discussing something with naitik and is sitting in the hall.
when naira comes there and tries to get kartik's attention but fails miserably then she sees naitik is leaving from there so she goes towards kartik and says in straight forward tone 5 min me piche wale garden me Milo and leaves from there smiling.(naira's love tune plays)

Kartik says - ab kyu milna isey dance academy ka kaam to yahan bhi Bata sakti thi khair mai kyu jau 5 min me mai late karke jaunga.(in childish tone)
When he is about to leave akshara comes there and starts talking to him ,he too wants to reach to naira desperately but he is stucked.

Scene changes to the garden

Naira is impatiently waiting for kartik
N - poore 15 min ho gaye ye mendhak ab tak aaya kyu ni kahi phas to nahi gaya ya phir wo aana hi ni chahta ho mujhse gussa ho shyad. call karke dekhti hu she calls but kartik disconnects because he is with akshara
Naira- is mendhak ki to... itna bhaav kha raha mai isey chodungi ni
Par naira tumne bhi to usey itna wait karwaya hai 5 min aur wait karti hu and she starts biting her nails thinking when will kartik come
Then after another 15 mins naira in anger - ye mendhak ko itna bhaav ni khana chahiye tha ab iska hi nuksaan ho Gaya ab dekho aur do hafte isey ni bataungi ki mai isse pyaar karti hu and she turns and sees kartik is standing there
Kartik's inner thoughts while he is still with akshara
kartik:kya karu jao ki nhi. nhi jaata phir kuch bol degi aur phir humarey bich jaghda ho jaega he is about to leave but stops akhiri good bye toh bol k jaa he shakta pata nhi badh mein mulakat ho bhi ya nhi.(kartik's sad bg)

he goes to the backyard were naira was waiting acc to the msg.
kartik: pata nhi hogi bhi yaa nhi kya pata saayad na ho 15 min phele bulaya aur madam toh kisse ki sunti nhi .galati ki chaley jaana chaiye tha . chodho ah he gaya hue toh milkey jaata hue

when he was about to enter he hears naira's angry voice: yeh mendak itna bhav kyu kha raha hai milne bulaya tha 5 min phele ab tak nhi aya

given to the situation he would have teased her but today he was in no mood of that until he heard something that made his heart stop n jump in joy the words he so desperately wanted to hear from her mouth.

ab mein uss mendak ko bataungi he nhi ki mein kitna pyaar karti hue usse bhav khana hai na toh khao muhey kya ab 2 week 3 week ya 1 mahina nikal jaye nahi batungi khane do bhav mujhey kya.

and she turns around to see a shocked kartik.

kartik stumble and naira catched him n tries to straighten him up when he stop and hugs her tighly and say kya meine suna woh sach hai pls bato na sach hai .
phele he bahoot hurt kiya hai plss ab mein bardast nhi kar paunga tumhe paa kar phir nhi kho paunga.

Naira tries to get out of the hug n says kya suna tumne batana zara (naira is blushing) while she is looking down she says to herself tujhe khud hi to batana tha ye sab usey n ab jab usne sun liya hai to sharma kyu ri tu Tina hai Tina apne dil ki baat kehne se kyu sharmana then she turns in the other direction and says kartik bolo na kya suna tumne
Kartik comes close to her n says ni kuch ni tumney kuch kaha kya batao
Naira: (apne Mann me) ye medhak kuch jyada hi tar tar kar raha hai mujhe pata hai isne sun liya hai par bhaav khana jaruri hai iska.

While she was thinking kartik comes to her and turns her towards him n says naira bolo kya bolna chahti thi agar wo hi bolna chahti Jo mai kabse sunna chahta to bol do agar aj bol diya to ruk jaunga warna mai ja raha and he turns back and start moving
Naira goes running and hugs him tightly from back and says kartik I love u
Kartik - phir se bolna
Naira- I love u kartik I love u I really really love u
Kartik - phir se bolna
Naira- i love u kartik I love u and she shouts in happiness I love u kartik
Kartik keeps his finger on her mouth and says naira dheere se naira blushes and hugs him tightly
after the hug kartik holds her cheeks and  inclines his fore head to her forehead till their noses touch each other and say please mujhey punch karo
naira: hainnnn
kartik laughs n says phir mera sapna toh nhi warna isbaar mishti mujey sachi wala boxing bag na bana dey
naira smiles shyly and  says na.. and punches him but lightly

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