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Rating (out of five stars):

★★

Ifellinlovewiththemaincharacterofthisthoroughlywrittenstory. Itwassoamazing, Ihadfinishedthestoryinonenightprecisely.

IsoonbegantofallinlovewithDanaalso. Atfirst, Iwasshockedtheauthorhadchosenthisname, but, bytheend, Iwasextremelyfondofit.

Thisstorymademefeelemotion. Icried. "TheVirginityGames" hadmademefeelsomethingIhaven'tfeltbefore.

Thestorydidhavegrammarissues, andsincetheyconstantlyoccurredthroughoutthestory, theygotannoying. Onetime, thenameofamaincharacterwasspelledincorrectly.

Theendofthestorywasthemajorpitfall. Three-quartersofthewayin, Iwashooked. Then, afterawhile, Iwaslessexcitedtoreadthebook. Itboredme.

Theepiloguewasgarbage. Firstoff, I'mnotevensureifthatcanqualifyasanepiloguebydefinition. Theauthorspentsixtychaptersdevelopingastrongrelationshiptoenditintheepilogueforamanthereadersbarelyknew.Later, theauthorpostsanexampleoftheincident. Everythingthathappenedbetweenthetwomaincharacterscontradictedwitheverythingthathadbeendevelopedandgivenup.

Ifoundtheplotprettyunoriginal. Itwasthesameasanyothervirginitygamesstory. Tomakeitgood, theauthorwouldhavetohadchangeditalittle, sothereaderwouldn'thavefeltasiftheyhadalreadyreaditbefore.

Overall, thestoryisadecentread. Iwouldn'treaditagain. TheepiloguemademehateabookIonceloved.

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