Something About Me // Teen Wolf [BOOK 3] [COMPLETED]

We meet again

Well hello there, have me met before because I'm sure I know you?

Just kidding, ellow ! :D

Okay so I know I suck because this isn't a chapter but it's kinda something

I have a question, about my writing

I'm gonna give you a fragment of the first chapter but I'll write it twice but in two different styles of writing (I know that sentence didn't make any sense but bare with me)

Okay so this is the fragment in my normal writing style (like the two previous books)

"Yeah, you see. He gets it." Scott said looking back at his best friend. "He's covered in tattoos, Scott. Literally." Stiles said crossing his arms over his chest and leaning forward on his feet. "Aye are you guys ready?"

"Jep." we replied. "Aint got no problem with needles right?" The lady asked us. "Nope." We replied. We smiled at each other, he held each others free hand. Which was my left and Scott's right. Stiles leaned forward a little. "Meh I tend to get a little squeamish.." he muttered and next there was a thumb. I rolled my eyes and the lady looked stopped for a moment to look at my boyfriend who was now on the floor. "He yours?" She asked raising an eyebrows. "Jep." I admitted popping the 'p'. "I hope he has other talents which get him to deserve this heart." She winked knowing the heart she was giving me represented him. My cheecks flushed at her words.

and now the second one

"Yeah, you see. He gets it." Scott said looking back at his best friend. "He's covered in tattoos, Scott. Literally." Stiles said crossing his arms over his chest and leaning forward on his feet. "Aye are you guys ready?"

"Jep." Sam and Scott replied. "Aint got no problem with needles right?" The lady asked the twins. "Nope." They replied, Sam smiled at her brother and he returned the smile. They held each others free hand, which was Sam's left and Scott's right. Stiles leaned forward a little. "Meh, I tend to get a little squeamish..." he muttered and next there was a thumb. Sam rolled her eyes and the lady stopped for a moment to look at her boyfriend who was now on the floor. "He yours?" She raised raising an eyebrow. "Jep." Sam admitted, popping the 'p'. "I hope he had other talent which get him to deserve this heart." She winked knowing the heart she was giving me represented him. Sam's cheeks flushed at her words.

Now what I want you to do, tell me which one you like better, I kinda like both of 'em, the second is more like... how do you say it.. idk writer-ish idk irdk anyway, just tell me which one you like better!

ily <3