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In Love With a Human

Ever since her mother was murdered by humans, Rachel has been afraid to trust anyone, much less a human. It's forbiddin that a mermaid and a human fall in love, but it happened to her, when a cute surfer named Will saves her. At first she's scared, but she learns not all humans are evil. Pluse with her 20th year comin...