something short while I work on a long paradise lost story. a small bit of the end and some David things. i choose to look at all contexts, David cannot handle feeling so much, seeing as a meltdown causing him to snap was the death of shaw on most versions of the script but he does love her, I thought maybe I would go through his guilt and trying to fix everything. Have him haunted, have him seeing the kindness in daniels as Shawlike as well as anger at her for not being her in may be a later chapter, or make this all flash backs. I dunno, english editor will handle it.