Everything that you read here are just my opinion about the stories that I read. I don't intend to offend anybody especially the person who wrote the story. If you are the author, you have a choice to take it constructively and improve your story or you can get offended and get back at me. But overall, I just wanna share my opinion and hopefully I can help you improve your story. PS: I'm not a pro but I have a taste. Thank you! Peace!
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