Part 2 of Alternative Universe 7. This story has no quotation marks for speech, part 3 chapter 27 and actually recently 15 is when it starts and gets better as I learn to properly (more or less) story write. From here on in the story changes completely and honestly has hardly anything to do with DB after the 2nd half or so. These stories are nearly full on improvised as I write them. Some ideas are pre written so I can use them whenever it fits the story to do so, sometimes I completely change the stories outcome and those ideas get deleted or perhaps reused in another part instead. Because it's improvised it's caused some pretty hectic problems. Missing story elements, forgotten characters/forgotten moments, things written previously and than changed in the next few sentences. It's incredibly frustrating ... but it's just how it is. There "WILL" be problems. Even part 1 had some pretty nasty issues when I re read it.
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