okay so this is my first fic, it's only 2 chapters long, yeah so I wasn't really sure as to whether I should upload this or not, but oh well here goes! It's told in a third person/Bon view. Please tell me what you think! Positive and negative comments are welcome as they will help to improve my writing. I'm sorry about the ending, I really didn't know how I was going to finish so I sort of just let it putter out... If anyone has any suggetions on how to end this better, I'm all ears! I feel like I've kind of ruined it (seriously guys, help me!) Now read on(~'3'~)