Chapter 1 Doesn't Exist This Is Old

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So there are going to be changes to this story and it starts after percy defeats the bronze bulls and before the chariot race
I'm also going to cut parts of the book out cause there's only so much I can handle.
I am going to make some changes so yay
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After a long day of chariot planningp with annabeth and border patrol percy jackson was starving as soon as he sat down he piled tons of food onto his plate and started chowing down. "You look hungry" stated tyson giggling softly "youf have no idea" said percy with his mouth full of meat. This causes tyson to laugh making everyone to stare at them. Percy notices this and asks tyson to calm down, when tyson finally calmed down percy sat up and went over to the fire to offer some food to the gods and to avoid further embarrassment.

"Uhh dad when I said I needed help this is not what I meant".

While percy was wallowing in his own self embarrassment a camper by the name of Mark was partroling the border of the camp looking bored. He stopped by thalais tree to rest
"uuh Im so hungry, why did i have to lose that bet" he thought while anamilty crying.

Le Flashback

It shows the ares campers in their cabin
Clarisse: alright we have figured out a schedule with the athena cabin for border patrol around the camp and we will do it with an athena camper, any volunteers.

No one raised there hands

"alright then I guess we draw straws. The shortest will do have to do border patrol at dinner do not worry we save you some food after dinner is that understood".
Everyone nodded there head in understanding
"good let's do this"
After they got the pieces of straw they took turns taking one each. Clarisse got the second largest one and and Mark got the shortest

Mark: hades
Arnold: ha! Suck it loser
Mark: what did you say
Arnold: I said suck, it, loser
Mark: your gonna die
Clarisse: boys! Take your anger out on the enemy not each other.

They quiet down

"good now Mark your going to be on patrol at dinner we'll save you some food okay". Clarisse states
"okay" Mark grumbels

Flashback end

"stupid tree making me miss dinner just cause it needs protecting" mark says to himself. Bea just looked at Mark like he was an idiot and says "your lucky it's dinner and not breakfast". Mark ignores him and stares out into the distance trying to distract himself of his hunger when he saw a humanoid figure approaching the camp "uhh hey Bea someones approaching the camp" Bea looked at were he was pointing "probably just a new camper but we can't be to careful go get reinforcements" mark nodded and started running to camp.

Percy Pov

When I got back to the table I asked tyson how his day was started talking really fast.
"Well first I went to the forge with beckendorf and I made some practice swords and then at breakfast I had peanut butter and jelly sandwich (uhh amaricans😒) and it was really good then after that I tried to make friends withe the pony's with wings but they don't like me", he said looking sad "after that I went to try out archery and someone helped me but I broke their bow and they said it was fine and accidents happen but I felt bad so I fixed it and made it better and she got really happy and high fived me so I made a friend and after that I worked on my project for a bit and the it was dinner time".
I stared at tyson trying to process what he said and was going congratulate him for making a friend that wasn't me or beckendorf when suddenly Mark came running in with armour and all

Tatalus: What are doing in armour and where have you been, answer me dammit
Mark: sorry sir but something is approaching the camp

As soon as Mark said this everyone went quiet and stared at him and Tatalus was still trying to grab some food.

Tantalus: Well what did it look like
Mark: It was humaniod in shape so probably a new demigod but we can't be to careful Bea sent me to come here and grab reinforcements just in case

"maybe it's luke" someone shouted
There was silence and then people started discussing if it was him and why came back "it can't be him can it no why would he come back now it doesn't make sense" I thought
We all looked at Mr D to see his opinion and...
He looked up, took along sip of his drink, and said "well go on then go find out who it is I don't care"...

As soon as he said that everyone got up and ran up the hill to see Bea on the ground and In pain holding her stomach and a tall hooded man standing over her "who are you what do you want" annabeth says trying to be intimidating and he chuckles softly "well answer me" she says holding her dagger ready to attack at any moment. He looks up and I see his stormy blue eyes scanning everyone when he gets to me we lock eyes and he grins. I tense and reach for riptide but before I can do anything he speaks

??? : ouch! Im hurt goldilocks I thought you would remember me.

Annabeths eyes widen in shock I look at her very confused?
"you" she says
I turn to see everyone else in shock as well even clarisse just who the hell is this guy. The man reaches for his hood and (you no that thing that covers your face and make you feel like a ninja something like that) takes them down revealing a 15 to 16 year old boy with a massive scar on his neck I take the time to get a proper look at him standing at 6'2 with light chestnut broun hair and stormy blue eyes witch look like they've seen to a lot a sarcastic smile playing on his lips. He was wearing a knee length brown coat (like the one from assassins creed) a t-shirt with mythomagic on it
(A/N:what is this foreshadowing I see)
Some black trousers (British are better) and combat boots. He also had a golden bronze long sword strapped to his back and a dark broun satchel on him

"For you see the great kieran has come back to save you all" the stranger says with a serious face
Annabeth sighs "hello again kieran".
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