Round 180 - April 11-17, 2021

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COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, April 11 – Saturday, April 17 , 2021, 11:59 P.M. PST

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: AmericanBruja

NOTE: Please let your partners know when they have reached the climax of your book so that they can use the Climax Comment Topic. We will no longer be listing it on the rounds as the club has grown so large it is hard to keep track. Thank you.

COMMENT TOPIC: Scene building/world construction is the backbone of any story but it can be difficult for writers to strike a balance

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COMMENT TOPIC: Scene building/world construction is the backbone of any story but it can be difficult for writers to strike a balance. Were you transported to 'that time or place'? Point out where the authors may have been under or over descriptive and suggest any possible improvements. Min. length: 6 sentences. Please post in the last chapter of this week's assignment.

META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP—Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

or NEEDS CAFFEINE—Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]

or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]

😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]

😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]

😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]

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ASSIGNMENTS:

Member: Partner Partner's Book - Chapters

ENFORCER: AmericanBruja

AuthorJMColes: PictureXThisX Return to the Wildlands - 14.2, 14.3, 15.1

PictureXThisX: AuthorJMColes Back Home: Book 4 - 10.1, 10.3, 11.1

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