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# 𝚛𝚎𝚖𝚎𝚖𝚋𝚎𝚛

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" 𝚑𝚊𝚟𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚏𝚞𝚜𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚋𝚘𝚘𝚔 "

yes i said it, and I'm well aware of the fact that neither of us are "perfect" writers .

but...

# 1
if your just saying names and its the beginning of the book we will not know who's who.

SO NEVER DO THAT.

so if you see those " who ? 💀 " comments don't get upset , we're just wondering.

#2
NEVER move to fast in a book, and then not have no type of progress.

how are you on chapter 6 and we dont even know who the main character is ? :|

im sorry but . Lmaoo i read a few books that were like that.

im only helping i swearrr.

#3

if your going to write dont always use quotations with no explanation behind it.

For example

" your very pretty "

" what thank you "

" your welcome "

" okay okay we get it "

We wont always understand whos saying things, especially if theirs a group of characters or more than two people talking.

i think thats all.

love yall.
thanks for 6k reads and all the support ❤️.