Man on Fire (Complete)

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>external link!

>this is dedicated to the author of the story

Two years ago, I fell inlove.

I built a dream just for this one girl.

But she left me.

I was a mess since then.

But they say, Life must go on.

Pero paano?

I'm Dr. Jairus Von Saavedra. 31 yrs. Old. Married and widowed at 29.

Mabubuo ko pa ba ang bahagi ng buhay ko na naibaon kasama ng pinakamamahal kong babae sa hukay?



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Another good and beautiful story from Ms. Author..., ang ganda ng plot kasi hindi masyadong ordinary yung mga pangyayare.., relate ako konti kasi may mga hospital setting, nurse din ksi ang peg ko.. hehehehe
Konting correction lang kay Ms. Author, hindi naman sa may pagka grammar echos ako, pero kasi siguro nalilito si Ms.Author sa pag gamit ng "Your" and You're" .... yan ung dapat na ma correct.., Your is possesive pronoun, where in yung You're is the short word for You are.., tolerable naman yung mga English, pramisss.... except sa your na un..hehehe, peace po! para lang matuto ng onte ng leksyon. :)

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