Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

kya chal raha hai??

Since many of you wanted me to update this one today so i m updating this......

N ya aage padh kar please mujhe maarna mat 😅😅.... Apne writer pad bharosa karna.... Mein bhi shivi hi chahti hoon

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In pandya niwas.... All were having their dinner.... They all were talking n laughing

Krish - pad gombi apne kyu shiva ko hi bhejna hai .... Dev ko bhi bhejo na.... Phir mein ghar mein akela enjoy karunga!!! (Excitingly)

Dev - agar mein chala jaunga toh tujhe dukan sambhalna padega.... Kar payega Tu akele!!! (Raising his eye brows)

Krish thought for some time

Krish - nahi nahi bhai yeh humse na ho payega (dramatically).... Tu ghar mein hi bet, shiva sab sambhal lega!!!! (Panicking)

Dhara - krish kitna bakwas karta hai na tu.... Abb chup chap khaana kha!!!

Krish nodded

Gautam - shiva Tu kal subha ke 7 ko nikal jaana!!! (Smiling)

Shiva slightly nodded

Dhara - Shiva kuch kuwa hai kya tu do din se itna ghum shum rehne laga hai.... Koyi problem hai kya??? (Worries)

All start at Shiva

Shiva pov

Abb kaise bolu ki bohot bari problem hai.... Woh chipkali mujhse pyaar karti hai!!!!

Gautam - shiva.....

Gombi voice brought me to reality

Gautam - Kaha khoy gaya??? (Concerned) ..... Sab theek toh hai na... Tujhe rajkot nahi jaana kya??? (Worried)

I nodded no

Shiva - nahi gombi , sab theek hai... Aur mein rajkot jaunga.... Waha pad naye suppliers se bhi toh milna hai na!!! (Giving a small smile)

Gautam - sure na..... Agar koyi problem  hai toh mein dev ko bhej dunga... Lekin Tu toh janta hai dev iss kam mein acha nahi hai!!!

Dev- ha Shiva agar mein gaya toh kam bigaad dunga!!!! (Looking down feeling embarrassed)

Shiva - it's k.... Mein jaunga!!! (Smiling)

Dhara - oh shit!!!!!

we all turn to bhabhi

Gautam - kya huwa dhara ?? (Panicking)

Krish - app theek toh ho na?? (Worried)

Dev - doctor ko call karu!!! (Worried)

Shiva - kuch chahiye??? (Worried)

Dhara - mein theek ho..... Tum log shaant ho jao!!!.....  Woh actually raavi ne call kiya, phone silent mein hone ke karan call utta nahi payi!!! (Smiling)

My heart skipped a beat hearing her name!!!!

RAAVI!!!!

Gautam - waise raavi ajj kal  kuch zyada hi busy nahi hoti.... Do din se bhi nahi aayi na??? (Thoughtfully)

Krish - ha meine bhi usse babli di ki engagement ke baad dekha hi nahi!!! (Thoughtfully)

Dev - pata nahi uss din woh ase hi chali gayi .... Humse baat bhi nahi kiya!!!!! Aur do din se na hi ghar na hi store aayi hai!!! (Worried)

Dhara - pata nahi  kya chal raha hai iske dimag mein!!! (Concerned)

Gautam - dhara Tu chinta mat kar, woh raavi hai agar koyi problem huwi hoti toh sabse pehle tujhe hi toh batati hai na!!! (Smiling)