Y/N is best friends with Ichika Orimura since childhood. One day Y/N along with his father and mother were kidnapped by a terrorist group for six months consistent of pain and suffering. Y/N's sister, Leanna, was luckily able to find them with some...
I know it's been a long time since I've come to this story, but after reading it, I felt that it was all over the place in terms of flow and what was added. In the beginning, I thought it would be a good idea with what was going on in the story, but looking back now.......yeah, no, it's not good.
I will admit there are some elements of this story that I enjoyed, like the MC not speaking as he's a "mute," since it was a change of pace. The different POV sections were a good twist, seeing how the other characters acted and knowing what they're thinking. However, the other stuff with what was going on just looks awful. Elements that I thought worked together back then just make no sense now.
As such, I'll be rewriting this story, but I'll still keep this on post mainly for a lesson learned style; this is for me. Don't worry about thinking I'll be deleting this one. Seeing how many people like it, I'm not going to take it away cause that's just mean. For the new title for this story, I already have something in mind, as here is a picture of it :)
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Before you say anything, let me just say, I have NO REAKING CLUE ABOUT GUNDAMN AS ALL I KNOW IS THAT THESE SUITS ARE BADASS!!!!!!!!
My knowledge about the Gundam verse in general is very minimal, as I may know a few characters and Gundam, but that is it!! I'm doing this solely for the IS rewrite, so don't expect any other gundams to show up.......well maybe one or two but NO MORE. Then again, it could change, but my focus will solely be on the IS story............maybe.
Me right now:
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As for when the chapter will be, I'm not sure, but when it does come out, it'll be before the main storyline. So it'll be a build-up leading to the main events in the storyline.
Now, before you guys even ask, YES, it will be harem, you dunderheads. Like, come on!!!! How can I NOT make it a harem story because the girls are so cute!!!!!
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AGH!!!! LAURA IS SO CUTE!!!!!
Just to give you a little insight as to how the new story will go down. The MC, aka Y/N, will be from America will be transferred to the IS Academy at the start of the main storyline. However, three years before then, so 12 years old, there was an accident where he accidentally awakens a prototype IS developed by his father's company, which will make him the "first" male to pilot an IS. Despite his father's initial shock, he will keep this news top secret in the company so as not to draw any unwanted attention. During the three years beforehand, he will help his father out with testing America's latest IS, which will be known as the Freedom. As such, his father will help him understand the new IS systems, along with his sister coming home to help train him as well.
It's a rough start for now, but I wanted to inform you all of what's going on. As for the other old stories......I haven't decided yet. If I do decide on something, I will let you know.
