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❄ ROMANCE OF THE PORTALS | SAHITI ❄

Reviewer: Nebulaxxx_1401
Book: Romance of the portals
Author : kakolisingha

Cover: 10/10
The cover is absolutely stunning and it really suits the story . The lines on the cover were great too and it really gave me Indian mythology vibes . Everything about the story is ancient and I'm in love with your cover.

Title: 10/10
The title was very creative to begin with. One of the most important details of the book is that the title was so simple to read but it held so much meaning in it .

Blurb/ description: 9/10
You described the scenes really well and the readers can actually feel the emotions and know what they are going through . It's a suggestion that you can also write about the past where yayati fell in love with apsara . you can write how they fell in love as it will only make more sense of the title. Write the struggles in detail for what they both went through personally.

Creativity / originality: 10/10
The story is very original and I can see the creativity in your writing and in your plot twists.
The characters and their personalities are really creative.

Plot flow : 20/20
The plot flow is really steady from which I can tell that you're quite professional . The plot gets really interesting as I read more and more .

Character development : 7/10
I didn't notice much change in any character in any way. As this is about mythology and ancient history , it is hard to notice any change or any particular difference in before and after in a person. You can develop any character in the story and make it noticeable.

Writing style / grammar: 10/10
Your writing style is perfect and it is so simple for readers to understand the scene .
The grammar that you used needs no correction at all. You took care of it all so perfectly that I didn't find any mistakes.

Genre relevance : 10/10
I can totally see this book as fantasy . The characters and the plot are just so amazing . From what I have read , the book is really fantastic and I can't fangirl enough .

Reader’s enjoyment :10/10
The readers will love to read your book . It's really unique and different . It definitely makes readers curious about what's about to happen next.

Overall : 96/100

Overall , your book is absolutely perfect for readers to read . Go through all the tips I have left for you which is not much.

All the best

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Love,
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