Umm the book wasn't that bad, the plot is pretty good but the way you wrote it made it kinda boring
Taking three chapters to get to the plot makes it really boring even though the plot is good, it would've been good if you got to the plot in the first chapter or two
And the conversations are also kinda boring like it's just "hi hello bye" I will recommend you to add some comedy in it
The first four or five chapters were boring but then it got kinda interesting and the way you write is really good, don't think it isn't good, it's just the way you took so long to get to the plot made it boring
If it's your first book then congrats you did very well
My first book was a mess
The book is good and most of you may like it but for me personally I find it kinda boring since it's that same old "bumping into your boss" story
Please don't find it harsh I am just giving my opinion
