Science Fiction🚀

24 1 2
                                    

Unfortunately the judge Fathii has only provided the top three scores and reviews as of now (I am chasing up the others so keep an eye out). My apologies to all participants. 

The Four Winds by HC_Leung
Cover - 3
Title - 4
Summary - 4
First line/paragraph - 10
Plot - 29
Characterisation - 4
Writing - 19
Grammar - 19
Total - 92/100

The summary gives an idea about the story . The first line is captivating to a reader . Analogies are well used . The details revealing Alberto's character slowly is good . The descriptions are so filmlike . The Bubble sounds almost like pandemic . AESOP ah ! How could I not connect it before . I haven't read much chapters so I don't know how the title and cover is relevant to the plot . Overall , it is a good book . 

The Monolith by vacado_stans_writing
 Cover - 3
Title - 4
Summary - 4
First line - 8
Plot - 27
Characterisation- 4
Writing - 18
Grammar - 18
Total - 86/100 

The Monolith is good title in my opinion . I liked the summary too . As for the cover , I feel it could be done better . The inclusion of elemental powers in the plot was highlight for me . Seej's emotions are displayed well . It reminds us the pressure of achieving something in the society . Her character is relatable in certain levels . Overall , it is nice book .

Blackstone Academy : The Rogue by DustyMoon96
Cover - 3
Title - 4
Summary - 4
First line/paragraph- 8
Plot - 25
Characterisation - 3
Writing - 18
Grammar - 19
Total - 84/100

Anything to do Academy , I would to read . Also the use of mutants is a bonus point . Nova is an interesting character . As a teenager , her manner and behaviour is written accurately . There aren't much descriptions in the scenes but it is okay . Your Grammar is good . I would suggest you to use an eye catching cover for your book . Overall , it is good book .

The Aeryn Awards 2021 [Complete]Where stories live. Discover now