Proposal

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It starts when Shiva decided to confess his love for raavi on the 31st night…he decorated the terrace area to surprise raavi but he had no clue that in just few time the surprise was going to be runined as raavi was angry on Shiva and dhara for not including her in the plan….after all the decorations were done on terrace Shiva comes to check it out….
Shiva ; (while looking at the decorations) sab kuch ek dam perfect Hai…. Ek dam flimi jaise meri chipkali ko pasand hai….finally aaj mai meri chipkali ko keh dunga mai usse kitna pyar krta hu…(blushes) Shiva ye sharamne ka time nhi hai….tu abhi bhi tayar nhi hai wo mami ki bhen ki…nhi…raavi se apne dil ki baat kehne ko….nhi matlab decide tho kar liya hai aaj kuch bhi ho jaye wo baat kehne hai par kaise kahunga….wo chipkali k samne aate he mera dimag kaam karna band kar deta……(looks at the watch) abhi time hai….ek kaam karta hu practice kar leta hu….kuch bhi ho jaye aaj kuch gadbad nhi hone chahiye….aane wala saal mujhe teri zindagi ka sabse behtareen saal banana hai….tujhe bhot sare khushiyaa Deni hai….
(He looks here there….he finds raavi’s duppata hanging on the rope…. He gets the duppata and tunks it on a hanger…)
Shiva pov : janta hu ye raavi nhi hai uska dupatta hai par agar isse dekh k bolunga tho practice ache se hogi….
On the other side raavi was angrily coming on terrace to say that she is going back to her masimaa’s house because no one consider her as a part of their family…
Shiva : (takes a deep breath) dekh raavi tu mujhe bachpan se janti hai…ye pyar vyar mere baski baat nhi…nhi matlab mujhe pyar vyar samjh he nhi aata….(hitting on his head) Abe gadhede aise bolega tu raavi ko ki tu usse pyar krta hai….chappal nikal k maregi wo chipkali tujhe….(Shiva to raavi’s duppata) ek baar fir se try karta hu….dekh raavi tu janti hai na mai bachpan se tujhse nafrat karta aaya hu….
(Raavi was standing at the door and heard it)
Raavi : (to herself) aur umid bhi kya kar sakti hu mai tujhse….tujhe tho bas wo mahaan dhara di se he pyar hai….
(Raavi was now hell angry and she was moving towards Shiva but she was shocked and stopped hearing Shiva’s next sentence)
Shiva : par ab wo nafrat pyar mai badal chuki hai….
(Shiva didn’t knew that raavi was standing right behind him and listening everything)
Shiva : ha raavi mai kabhi nhi socha tha ki mujhe meri mami ki bhen ki beti se pyar hoga par ab kya karu hogya….shayad ab tu bhi mujhe pasand karne lagi hai…?? (He blushed) dekh raavi mai janta hu ki maine tujhe bachpan se bhot sataya hai ladai ki hai….par tab ki baat aur thi….ab tho tu khud bhi janti hai na mujhe teri kitni chinta hai….tujhe khone k dar se meri jaan nikal jati hai….sach mai raavi I love you….(he blushed more thinking about) agar ye proposal acha nhi laga tho aur bhi hai apne pas…ruk mai ek ek kar k tujhe sab batata hu fir tu batana tujhe konsa acha laga….
(For a second he forgot it was not raavi it was just her dupatta in front of him….now for him it was his chipkali standing in front of him and listening)
Shiva : ha tho sun…roses are red…sky is blue….oh meri biwi I love you….(raavi made faces) pasand nhi aaya…?? Mujhe laga he tha ye internet Wale na kya chessy line likhte hai….tu tension mat le aur bhi option hai apne pas…ha tho sun…. sheshi hai kach ki pathar se Tod du raavi tere pyar mai Janardan ka muh thod du….ek dum mast hai na ye….?? Janardan ka kachara bhi kar diya aur pyar ka ishaar bhi kar diya….(raavi again made faces) ye bhi pasand nhi aaya tujhe?? Acha ruk aur bhi hai….ha tho sun…raavi tu na meri danhiya hai kya mast khushbo aati hai tere se....garam masala...
(He stopped in middle when he heard someone giggling behind his back….he turned around and found raavi giggling and laughing…he was so shocked seeing her…raavi came to him)
Raavi : (while laughing and pulling his cheeks) tujhe pata hai tu kitna cute hai…
Shiva : (nervously) tu… tu….kab aayi…??
Raavi : (laughing) jab tu apni chipkali k dupatte ko propose karne ki khoshish kar rha tha….
(Shiva was just admiring raavi as she was looking beautiful as well as cute while laughing)
Raavi : waise Shiva aise kon propose karte hai ladki ko?? Aise karega tho koi ladki ha nhi bolne wali Proposal kaam advertisement zada lag rhi thi….kabhi rose…kabhi Janardhan…kabhi dhaniya...tho kabhi masale….
(Raavi was continuosly laughing at his cute ways of proposing while Shiva felt bad as she was laughing)
Shiva : (sadly) tujhe acha nhi laga??
Raavi : (pulling his cheeks again) Shiva tujhe pata nhi hai tu kitna cute lag rha tha….mera cutiepie…waise sach kahu tho ye sab bhot funny the par bhot cute the especially phele wala Jo tune Dil se kaha tha…. I’m impressed….
(Shiva had a wide smile on his face)
Shiva : (happily) tho ab mere proposal ka jawab de…??
(Raavi remind silent)
Shiva : raavi bol na….
Raavi : (sadly) mai ghar chod k ja rhi hu Shiva…yahi batane mai upar aayi thi…
Shiva : (confused) ye tu kya bol rhi hai?? Tu mazak kar rhi hai na mere saath??
Raavi : koi mazak nhi hai ye Shiva…mai sach mai ja rhi hu….kis haq se ruku mai yaha Shiva??
Shiva : ye tu kya bol rhi hai raavi…?? Tu meri patni hai is ghar ki bahu hai aur ab tho hum ek dusre se pyar bhi karte hai na??
Raavi : (angrily) kaise patni kaisa pyar Shiva?? Tum tinno bhaiyo k liye dhara di he tumhare sab kuch hai na….dev k liye rishita zaruri nhi hai aur tere liye mai…???
Shiva : raavi tu ye sab kya bole ja rhi hai…raavi tu janti hai na tu kitni zaruri hai….
Raavi : zaruri hu isliye wo papers chori karne wali baat tum sab ne mujhse chupai…haina???
Shiva : raavi aaise koi baat nhi hai….
(And they argue….Shiva holds raavi’s hand and makes her sit on chair and gives her a glass of water…raavi drinks it…then Shiva kneels to her and holds her hand)
Shiva : raavi bas ek baar mere baat sun….
Raavi : mujhe kuch nhi sunna hai…chod mai ja rhi hu…
Shiva : raavi agar tu mujhse sach mai pyar krti hai tho plz bas ek baar meri baat sun le….
Raavi : thik hai bol….
Shiva : dekh wo baat humne tujhse chupai usse hamari galti hai mai manta hu par raavi tu bhi tho samjh na jitne zada logo ko pata hota utna zada risk hota….aur fir tujhe un gundo ne kidnap bhi tho kar liya tha aise mai kaise tujhe mai sab bata k stress deta….raavi dekh mera koi irada nhi tha Tera dil dukhaane ka…par meri wajhse tera dil dukha hai na tho tu jo saja dena chahe de mujhe koi problem nhi hai…par plz mujhe chod k jane ki baat mat kar…bade mushkil se hum saath aaye hai….
Raavi : jo bolungi wo manega…??
Shiva : ha jo tu bole wo….chand aur tare Tod k lau??
Raavi : jada flimi mat ban….
Shiva : acha sorry…bol kya chahiye tujhe??
Raavi : wada!!
Shiva : kaisa wada raavi??
Raavi : yahi ki tu aaj k bad mujhse koi bhi baat nhi chupayega…dhara di k khene par bhi nhi….jo bhi baat ho tu mujhe hamesha bataya….aur aise mujhe hamesha pyar krta rahega…..bol vada karta hai?? Ya mai masi k sath chali jau??.
Shiva : tujhe kahi jane ki jarurat nhi hai….mai wada krta hu aaj k bad tujhe kabhi dukh nhi dunga….ab tho jawab dede….
Raavi : konsa jawab..??
(Shiva stands and raavi too stands)
Shiva : mere proposal ka??
Raavi : (smiles) de du jawab…
(Shiva nods yes)
Raavi : (hugs him) I Love you too bhotnath…
(Shiva hugs her back tightly….and crackers brust in sky as it was new year….they break their hug)
Shiva : happy new year chipkali….ab tu dekhna kaise iss saal teri jevaan ki sare khushiya deta hu tujhe….
(Raavi gives a quick kiss on lips making him shock)
Raavi : happy new year bhotnath…
(Shiva was in shock still and staring her)
Raavi : ghur kya rha hai…khayega kya???
Shiva : (nervously) wo.. tune…abhi…??
Raavi : tu mujhe kiss kar sakta hai….aur mai nhi kar sakti???
(Shiva shocked again)
Shiva : tujhe kaise pata??
Raavi : meri bas akhee band thi mai soi nhi thi…
Shiva : tho tune kuch bola q nhi??
Raavi : q ki mujhe acha laga tha….
Shiva : acha??
(Shiva kisses her cheeks making her blush)

*THE END*

Maybe not that good but acha laga tho likh diya❤️
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