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Hey guys this is a really short poem that I wrote for my English class. Since I am in the poem Unit in class I wanted to have more than one or two opinions besides my class mates and teacher,So I decide it to post it here .I will love if you all comment with sincerity you're opinions. THANKS!
P.S. I will post more when I have the chance.✒
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HER EMPTINESS
By: Coraliss
From afar you could feel the
loneliness of her empty house
From afar you could hear
the wind traveling by
Making the door's slam's
BLAM! BLAM!
With pain against her
fragile white wall's
From afar you could feel
her body shiver
From the cold wind despairing
By her cracked windows,
Leaving her house, once again
by her own.
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Well guys there it is I hope you have enjoy it. Remember to voment and to share your opinion . Also I will love to know what the poem make you feel and if I success to transmit what I wanted. Thanks guys.
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HER EMPTINESS:short poem
PoesiHey guys this is a really short poem that I wrote for my English class. Since I am in the poem Unit in class I wanted to have more than one or to opinions from my class mates and teacher, So I decide it to post it here .I will lo...
