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˚༷🍒➮ 𝙱𝙾𝙾𝙺 𝙽𝙰𝙼𝙴 ➮ Dilf Deficiency
˚༷🍒➮ 𝙰𝚄𝚃𝙷𝙾𝚁 ➮ taes_smirk

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˚༷🍒➮ 𝙿𝚁𝙴𝚂𝙴𝙽𝚃𝙰𝚃𝙸𝙾𝙽 - 25 /30

˚༷｡ Appearance - 4/5
➮ The book is pretty decent and fascinating. I really liked the banners used at the starting of
every chapter.

˚༷｡ Title - 5/5
➮ The title is great and suits the storyline flawlessly. It is a unique title as well. The title is
perfect for the story

˚༷｡ Cover - 8/10
➮ The cover is wonderful. The peach colour matches with the vibe of the story. The font style of the title is also nice, but I think the font used for the line above the title is quite unclear.

˚༷｡ Description - 4/5
➮ The blurb of the story is neither too long nor too short. It's faultlessly fine and matches with
the storyline. It doesn't give away the whole story and intrigues the reader to read more. The
only mistake was in the line "Little do she knew" it should be "did" in place of "do" because
''knew '' is being used. Other than that the description is great.

˚༷｡ First impressions- 4/5
➮ The first impression of the story was quite catchy. But in the starting of the story there were a few typos. I would suggest you to proofread the first four chapters.

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˚༷🍒➮ 𝙻𝙰𝙽𝙶𝚄𝙰𝙶𝙴 𝚂𝙺𝙸𝙻𝙻𝚂 - 24/𝟹𝟶

˚༷｡ Grammar - 7/10
➮ There were a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes in the story like in the first chapter
you forgot to add "use" beside Lategram. Also you should write "which is also mine" instead
of "that is also me" because of the tense. You should also remove "was" which is beside
"almost pissed" . Also you should use "opened" instead of "open" in the line "and open the dial pad" as you were on the past tense in that line so you can't switch tense in one line. You also need to use
"Does that" instead of "Is that" in a chapter [ I forgot the chapter number and line I am sorry
:'( ]

˚༷｡ Vocabulary - 9/10
➮ The vocabulary used in the story is pretty awesome. I really liked the words that you used in some parts. The words weren't that tough either, that the reader had to go and search on
google. The vocabulary was easily understandable and nice. Also i loved the Lategram and Shitpad kind of words.

˚༷｡ Spellings - 8/10
➮ There were a few typing errors or spelling mistakes that I saw, they weren't too noticeable but a few mistakes were very noticeable too. Like, you used the word "Latergram" accidentally instead of "Lategram" . There were some other mistakes also like "y'all" instead
of call and "leavee" instead of leave.

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˚༷🍒➮ 𝚆𝚁𝙸𝚃𝚃𝙴𝙽 𝙲𝙾𝙽𝚃𝙴𝚇𝚃 - 29/𝟹𝟶

˚༷｡ Plot - 10/10
➮ The plot was amazing. I really liked it very much. It was very unique indeed. The creativity
was fantastic. The plot twist also was so stunning. I really enjoyed reading the story as a
reader. In short the plot and the plot twist was perfect.

˚༷｡ Flow - 10/10
➮ The flow of the story was also at an amazing pace. There weren't too many time skips either.
The author didn't rush things and explained everything smoothly.

˚༷｡ Character development- 9/10
➮ The emotions of the protagonist aka Raemi was explained amazingly. The readers could feel it. But I think at the end the emotions weren't explained that much smoothly. They were a bit
rough in the ending chapters.

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˚༷🍒➮ 𝙾𝚅𝙴𝚁𝙰𝙻𝙻 𝙰𝙿𝙿𝙴𝙰𝙻 𝙾𝙵 𝚃𝙷𝙴 𝙱𝙾𝙾𝙺 -  9/𝟷𝟶

˚༷🍒➮ 𝙵𝙸𝙽𝙰𝙻 𝚁𝙴𝚅𝙸𝙴𝚆 𝙸𝙽 𝚂𝙷𝙾𝚁𝚃 𝚃𝙾 𝚂𝚄𝙼𝙼𝙰𝚁𝙸𝚂𝙴 𝙴𝚅𝚁𝚈𝚃𝙷𝙸𝙽𝙶 : -

Personally, I really liked the plot of the story. The way you broke the fourth wall in the first
chapter was very hilarious and interesting and the things you said were one of the things that
no one talks about much. It was very unique. The way the author executed the story was
amazing. There were a few grammatical mistakes in the starting but they weren't that much
either. The emotions of the characters were explained very smoothly, except at the ending.
In the ending chapters the sad emotions of Raemi were not quite convincing. Other than that I loved the story and even added it to my reading list. Waiting for the next chapters patiently ;)

˚༷🍒➮ 𝚃𝙾𝚃𝙰𝙻 - 87/𝟷𝟶𝟶

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Reviewed by
50shadesofvkook