I'm so cold jack....

Cold (chapter 1

"Get ready to let go rose..." jack tells rose as the ship of dreams sinks into the freezing cold ocean below "rose let go....Now!"
Jack and rose both let go and swim to the surface of the freezing water jack get to the ocean surface and looks around to see rose is not with him he yells out for rose and hears his name being called back he swims towards where he heard his name and finds rose "rose!" I yell and hug her
"J-Jack im c-cold" she says "I-I know rose im cold to.." jack looks around and he can't see
anything but people panicking in the water all they can do is sit and hope someone comes and saves them. they sit there
And freeze its getting hard to stay awake "r-rose in need you to t-tell me that you won't ever l-let go of my h-hand"i say to rose
She Stares into my eyes "I-I won't ever l-let go of y-your hand jack.."she says we both hold each other's hand and close
Our eyes and fall into a deep sleep of darkness

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I open my eyes slowly mind(ah it's so bright) once my eyes adjusted to the light I looked around and saw that I was in a metal room "w-what where am I?" I whisper to myself I get up and walk over to the metal door and try'd to open it "locked...damn it" I bang on the door and yell for help I walk over to my cot that I had been lying on previously I sit there with my head resting on my hands
Suddenly I hear a creek I look up to see a women standing in front of the door I get up and walk near her I am much taller than her and she is clearly a lot older than me two men in metal looking suits come in behind her carrying guns I take a step back "w-who are you And what do you want from me?" I say "sit down boy!" The guards yell at me they push me onto the cot and chain me to the wall with hand cuffs i pull on the cuffs trying to get them off me but obviously that didn't work "stop that!" The women yells i look at her with anger but inside im scared of what's gonna happen to me
"What's your name boy?" She asks me I stare her in the eyes "jack Dawson" I say she looks down at her clipboard and write's probably my name down "age?" She asks "uh...twenty" I say I look at this women more her hair is red and curly it reminds me of rose....Rose! "Where is rose!" I say loudly I start pulling on the cuffs again more aggressively the guards point there guns at me "Tell Me Where Rose Is!" I yell at them the women looks down at her chart and flips the page she hums "Mr. Dawson can you look on this chart and find this "rose" for me?" I look at her for a moment and nod i look at the chart and it has all the names that started with R first class second class then third I look down the chart and Find Rose's name "I found her"I say "can you tell me her full name Mr.Dawson..." she asks I nod "R-Rose DeWitt Bukater..." I say nervously she grabs the chart and hums "I'm sorry Mr. Dawson but Miss. DeWitt Bukater has passed" she says with an evil smile I just stare at her in shock tears welling in my eyes I sink down looking at the floor "w-What..." I whisper "she's dead" the lady says again I look up at her hatred building up "Get Out! Get Out Now!" I yell at her she looks at me shocked and then just smiles and gets up and walks out I lay there crying sill hand cuffed to the wall.