13....a proposal

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Rits : waise maanna padega kya naam rakhe hai... So cute...

Raavi unknowingly blushed  , she turned her face , trying to hide the smile

Shiva noticed and smiled

At night , in raavi's room

Raavi was thinking about the day

Raavi : maine socha hi nhi tha ki kabhi aise kisi se dosti bhi krungi.. pr sach me in kuch dino me acha lagne lga hai shiva ke sath.. usse baat krne ka mn krta hai.. uski baate sunna acha lagta hai.. aur aj jo usne rits ke liye kiya... Aisi dosti bahut hi lucky logo ko milti hai.. and i m really feeling lucky ki ab wo mera bhi frnd hai

Mujhe to lagta tha ki mere kabhi koi frnnds bnenge hi nhi pr aj dekho mere teen teen frnd hai aur tino best hai...

She recalls her banters and chuckled

Raavi : maine aj tak kabhi kisi se aisi ladai ki hi nhi... Pr bht hi acha lg rha tha usse aise ladna.. aisa lagta hai na ki mai jo chahu wo bol sakti hu shiva se.. lad sakti hu .. jo raavi aj tak khi andar chupi thi wo shiva ke samne bahar aane lagi hai... Thank you bhagwan ji.. thank you so much shiva jaisa frnd dene ke liye

In shiva's house

Shiva was tossing on the bed recalling raavi holding his hand , her hand on his shoulder,the group hug
Smile was not leaving his face, he was again and again looking at his hand

Shiva : aj pehli baar raavi ne mera hath pakda bs ab ye hath wo hmesa ke thaam le...bahut pyaar krta hu usse.. bs mere pyaar ka ehsas use bhi ho jaye
I love her... I... Love...raavi. He sceamed in joy

Next day college

Rits shiva and purab was waiting for raavi

Rits : ye raavi kaha reh gayi, aayi nhi av tak

Shiva was looking towards the gate

Purab : aati hi hogi.. itna desperate kyu ho rha hai

Shiva : ek baar tujhe bhi pyaar hone debeta.. phr yhi sawaal puchunga tujhse

Purab : hayee.. yaar, hm to kbse taiyar baithe hai.. koi
hmse pyaar kre to...

Shiva : tera kuch nhi ho sakta

Rits chuckled while purab made faces

Raavi entered

Rits : lo aa gayi raavi

They went towards raavi but stopped seeing a boy approaching towards raavi

Rits : ye ladka raavi ki tarf kyu jaa rha hai

Purab : chal paas jaa kr dekhta hai

A boy came in front of raavi , raavi stopped
Raavi gave him a questioning look

Boy : hllo... I'm aman.. forwarding his hand

Raavi did not respond

Boy taking his hand back : wo.. mujhe tumse kuch baat krni thi

Raavi signed him to speak

Shiva ,rits and purab was standing at a distance,they can hear them

Raavi did not saw them

Aman : darasal, jab se tum is college me aaayi ho, mai tumhe notice kr rha hu.. tum bahut hi sundar ho,.. tumhe dekhte hi pyaar ho gaya hai tumse....

Purab : yaar ,ye to ravi ko propose kr rha hai


Rits getting angry: himmat to dekho iski.. ise av mja chakhate hai

Shiva tighten his fist

He was getting angry but composed himself

Purab : dekh kya rha hai shiva,. Chal

Shiva did not reacted,he was just looking at raavi

Aman : bahut baar socha tumse keh du.. pr keh nhi paya,...pr ab aur chup nhi reh sakta...
He forwarded a rose : I LOVE YOU

Shiva in mind : saale apni shakal dekhi hai.. raavi se pyaar krega.. tujhse to koi bandaria bhi pyaar naa kre.. mn to kr rha hai ki kaan ke niche do lagau.. sara pyaar ek hi min me bhul jaega


Purab : tu soch kya rha hai shiva..chal

Shiva composing himself : nhii.. yhi ruko

Rits : paagal ho gaya hai kya shiva,. Wo raavi ko propose kr rha hai...aur tu hme rukne ko bol rha hai... Tu sayad bhul gaya hai ki tu usse pyaar krta hai

Shiva glared her : tujhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe ye dekh kr acha lg rha hai... Mn to kr rha hai ki jinhatho se wo raavi ko phool de rha hai na us hath ko tod kr phek du... Pr ye faisla raavi ka hai...to hme uske jawabka intejaar krna chahiye

Purab : pr...
Shiva looking at raavi : mujhe jaanna hai ki uske dil me kya hai

Raavi was stunned

Aman : aise kya dekh rhi ho... Kuch to bolo...

Raavi : dekho...mai tumhe jaanti bhi nhi..aur tum ye sab..

Aman : nhi jaanti to jaan lo..hum thoda time sath me spend krte hai..phr tum mujhe jawaab dena

Raavi :nhiii... Mujhe iski jarurat nhi hai

Aman : iska matlab tum bhi mujhse pyaar krti ho

Shiva heartbeat incresed.. he was waiting for the ans holding his breath..

Raavi sternly : nhii.....i don't

A smile crept on shiva's face

Aman : plss raavi.. i really love you..thoda time mujhe
de kr to dekho.. tumhe bhi pyaar ho jaega

Raavi : aisa kabhi nhi ho sakta... Mai kabhi kisi se pyaar nhi kr sakti...

Aman : raavi...

Raavi : plss..ek baar me baat smjh nhi aati... I don't means i don't.. na kisi se pyaar tha..,na hai.. aur na kabhi hoga.. is pyaar vyaar ke chakkar me padna hi nhi hai mujhe

Shiva was hurt by her words

Raavi turned  and saw shiva ,rits and purab standing

She went to them

Raavi : tum log yhi the..

Rits :haa,.. dekha hmne sab

Tbc....











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