Our Children *sequel to Mommys Girl*

Awww man {part 3 of 4}

??- raven baby its mommy

raven: you aint my mommy my mommy in the room *points to hospital room*

??- *tears up* Devin why you made her believe that?

devin: i aint make her believe anything you left us mostly Raven she was 2 days old and you left her in the street to get ran over,Christina!!

christina: that was when i was 15 who wants a child when they 15?

devin: and i was 14 i still got together and took care of my respnsibilty you ran away usually the fathers run away but no i toke care of my child and still is and how do you want her to know you and you dont even know her middle name??

christina: ...

devin: thats what i thought

raven: excuse me miss but who are you?

christina: just..forget it! you made her believe another woman was her mom this is my child and she should be calling me mommy!!! *crying*

rhianna: well maybe if you would have never been a deadbeat mom she would be calling you mommy!! and thats not your child she dont even look like you

christina: and yours do??

rhianna: yep! my child is an exact replica of my so go sit down somewhere cuz she has someone to take care of her

christina: *leaves*

devin: *yells after her* thats why she dont know who you are!! you always walked in and out of her life

doctor: okay...bad news

rhianna: *starts crying*

doctor: shes in a coma

omariana: whats a coma?

doctor: its injury to the brain...the brain is bruised and they get knocked out of cousiouness then thats when you can say they are in a coma

omariana: *sadly* oh *sits on floor in criss-cross applesauce*

raven: *does the same and holds omarianas hand* are you okay??

omariana: no my mommy is hurt

raven: *hugs Omariana*

omariana: these past few days has been weird and bad

raven: i know

christiani: *hugs them* it'll be okay RiRi eventually she'll be back up on her feet

omariana: but Raven doesnt live with me

doctor: and the baby almost got killed

omariana: so my sister would have been dead?

doctor: almost

devin: *leaves*

rhianna: *cries even more* why not Devin

these past couple of days has been heatic for the characters especially Omariana and Nicki they been having the worst of feelings and that was Omariana's 3-4 time being in a hospital 2 times for her self!!! Wow!! thats all I could say comment and vote

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