ALRIGHT - I know what I should do next, maybe the start of Commander Shepard's mission to arrest Saren.
Noveria?
Or
Feros?
Or should next Chapter be an introduction to the Squad? (As wall as introducing Shipmistress Tesa, and Admiral Victoria.)
Is Ulz relatable in a way?
Is the story going too fast, or jumping around?
Constructive Criticism is welcome.
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Mass Effect :: Spartan Intervention
FanfictionSpartan VII's, top of the line armour, weapons, and training... Meet "Ulz" Z-101, one of the first Rakshasa Class Spartan VII's. Now he's gone missing, and the only reasonable explanation for his disappearance, is the sudden influx of Slipstream fai...
