chapter 1 death (edited edition)

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Thinking>  'i'm hungry for fried rice'

Frederick speaking>  :hello

System: [my braincells are gone because of this sh!t](dont want to spoil on what going to happen to the system)

Other people speaking> ;hello heretic

Golem speaking> :my name Is Elwin

Action *opens door*

Narrator/me  hello there
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Long ago- you know what just go to Frederick POV

                                                         FREDERICK'S POV

'My name is Frederick i was born in a poor household i tried to help my parents but, my parents told me to just study for my education and get. a peaceful life but one day my father was killed in a Robbery and after that, my mother gotten depress and died shortly after my father's funeral im still 16 at the time now in the past 3 years i have been working on a part time job to save some money for collage but when i was walking'

*HONK HONK!* 'It miss me when i Jump back to the side walk i was panting heavily when it nearly hit me when i was walking*

Frederick:not today 'i said to myself as i slowly stand up'

                                                                      location;unknown POV;?????

?????;hm  so he survive well then i'm impress i thought he was, going to just die there but i have other plans for him *the being open his hand and a magic like circle appear on his palm and it appears to be a heart and when he crush it Frederick heart was broken then he died*

?????;i will continue this one way or another now lets give you the system that i made, well then lets get started 'said the unknown being'

                                                                     Frederick POV LOCATION; the void

i woke up with a dizzy head i only remembered almost being hit by a truck

Frederick:huh were am i?... *I look around and see nothing but black like space but i can still breath and i see a screen like a monitor of the color brown floating  besides me*  

[Ding! new host has been found preparing to link souls]

Frederick:huh!?... i heard a robot like voice 

[10% 21% 33% 43% 59% 69% 70% 83% 93% 100%

Ding! soul link has been successful]

Frederick:oh no did i just got isekaid!?.but i din't get hit by truck-kun did i just died from fear or something!... i start to wonder why i died but now i have to see what will happen in this

[host must now pick a universe to reside in

star trek(dont know the show to bad you ain't picking this)

Warhammer 40k(Will be in a random planet and your stats will a bit strong than an average human/on any planet except the hostile ones that can somewhat house human life)

Avatar(not the last airbender one and you will become an alien)

 scp foundation (cn branch. you will be a  regular human if you pick this one)

lovecraftian horror (death before arrival)]

Frederick:... F#ck my luck 

[host must pick in 40 seconds before soul erasure]

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