The monster inside

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The burning rage and hatred I've been making Ichigo feel is good I must say, but not just as good as I want it to be. Right now for the past seventeen chapters I have to admit it is weak, unresponsive and just a child flaring his anger to the world around him. I love Eclipse, and this is not an author note to tell you that I plan on rewriting Eclipse either. From this point on though, I going to make a vow to make this fic and Ichigo darker, more brutal, more cruel, and downright sadistic and cold to any person that as deem to alley themselves with Aizen and Juha Bach.

The few people I had Ichigo kill were kind of good to me, and I got to say I love the way I wrote it. But, the way I wrote it to me it seems a bit that Ichigo still holds somewhat regret to what he's becoming. I know it sounds weird a bit the way I'm trying to say this, but I hope just a bit you get what I'm trying to say. I want Ichigo to become a true killer, someone that doesn't care who he kills, be it woman, child, or elder. As long as it gets him towards his goal of killing both Aizen and Juha Bach, then he doesn't care who he cuts down before him. This seems to be a bit sick or badass to you? Let me know what you think about this.

Not going to give myself full credit for this and say that I thought about this by myself because I didn't, got to say that the recent Bleach chapters have truly help me out a lot. After reading the fight against Juha Bach and Yamamoto, I remember Juha Bach saying that back then the Gotei 13 was nothing but Divisions. If I really remember correctly, he said that they were nothing but heartless but true killers, which made them truly and unmatched and feared group. From what Juha Bach explained, Yamamoto himself sacrifice anything back them to make sure he accomplish his goal, and that reason made him so feared back then.

I don't want Ichigo to sacrifice everything (mainly Moka and Kumiko) to gain his revenge, but it's going to be pretty damn close to want he's going to be doing, and to what I want. Again he is going to start killing, using enemies to gain benefit, torturing anyone that alley or dare let themselves work with Aizen and Juha Bach. This is a friendly warning! And hope you enjoy the carnage that is soon to come.

Series of Eclipse: Really glad that all of you have voted on the little poll I created last chapter, have to say after all that I've come to what will happen in the second part of Eclipse. To tell you the truth, I was planning on writing the next part of this with Code Geass. But I decided against it though, just because of the small error with the Knight mare Frames that I refuse to talk about, but I will write this with another fic that long away. But over the past two or three weeks, I finally decided to take the next part in Naruto. Don't let the worry start to get to you! I promise that they will not enter the Shinobi Nations with some lame ass way. I promise it's going to be emotional, brutal, and painful for some along with most of you going to be pissed off with some characters. Also I know what some of you are thinking so please stop right now.

Not trying to accuse no one of nothing, just that I've seen it too many times to know what probably some of you might be thinking at the current moment. It's probably none of you, but I just got to say it before someone gets the wrong idea with the next part of the series being crossover with Naruto. From what I've read from thousands of Naruto fic's and crossovers, some might thing along this is what I might have plan for the next fic. Some might thing that when Ichigo arrives into the Elemental Nations or Konoha and see Naruto, he's going to feel sorry for him and how the people treated him. He's then going to take care of him, then train him to become a shinigami. It sounds badass doesn't it? Maybe I should-

That shit will never happen

Just to give you all a fair warning, and don't take this as me trying to be a bastard cause that is by no means what I'm trying to do. I have read hundreds of crossovers with Naruto/Bleach with Naruto being the main character and main focus. I have seen so many of the same fic that I'm sorry to say, but it's getting border line to pathetic. Naruto somehow come to the Soul Society or Karakura Town, gets training from the gods of the Spirit world, be godlike, and get almost all the woman in the entire Bleach manga.