𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐞𝐫:𝐢𝐦𝐨𝐠𝐞𝐧𝐨𝐠𝐮𝐜𝐜𝐢𝟎𝟏
𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐭𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: Stygain
𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫: kindawhoresomexoTitle: 10/10
When I read the title, I expected it to be about dark deep rooted emotions like depression and all the works but then I read the first chapter and it was about love. I loved that.Cover:10/ 10
I have no complaints.Writing style: 10/10
I love how you write, your diction and vocabulary is beautiful. It's like I can hear you telling me the poem and I think that is an amazing quality every poem should have.Use of figures of speech: 18/20
I LOVE how some of your poems feel like extended metaphors. I didn't catch on to a lot of figures of speech but the ones that were used were executed perfectly.Imagery: 10/10
I could visualize what you were talking about in your poems, your choice of adjectives are amazing.Flow of words: 10/10
I can tell these poems came naturally to you, the speech doesn't feel forced.Enjoyment: 10 /10
Your book has great pieces.Originality: 7/10
The concepts you write about aren't anything new. They all seem to focus on similar concepts, though there is nothing wrong with that, it is not original.Grammer, spelling and vocabulary: 6/10
I suggest you get a third party to proofread your book, I felt that some sentences could use a 'the' or 'a' to make them grammatically correct. Please remove the bold and italic font, it makes your poems really hard to read. Using a regular don't will not change the feel of the poems.𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥: 𝟗𝟏/𝟏𝟎𝟎
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