Hi hello wowzers I updated today already yeah but Uhm so
Looking back at this story, I feel as if it's not the best I can do. The whole time I didn't even know what's to write from the main characters point of view on things so I just said "oh em gee my lover is gonna die someday I'm so sad". Yes, that's upsetting, but it was like a constant thing and I feel like I could do much better. I know we're this far into the story and it's just the one or two chapters left to write but I'm thinking of rewriting this entire thing and making it much better than it is at the moment. When I write things I want to be proud of it, and this isn't something I'm very proud of. I basically want to keep the characters as is in terms of the whole vampire plot but I want to have a different approach at whatever love story there is. Thank you for following this even though I barely update, all of your comments had me sitting there giggling while I was reading.
Some key points may include
1. Who the hell fucks someone when they're still unsure of their sexuality and if being who you are is really okay
2. That fucking prank in the first couple chapters (I don't remember which) was too far
3. Honestly yes, I agree with the 'oh my brother just died! Let's eat ice cream!'
4. Why were the first 3 chapters so short, I could've made them all into one. I try to make chapters 1000 words or more
5. The amount of dumb cliffhangers like "tommy? 🥺" and then it just ends
6. Fuck the side stories in the middle of the thing, they get their own chapters
7. Why the wall paragraphs?
8. Better dialogue, I started this not knowing how the fuck to properly input dialogue
9. Not as much repetitiveness
10. More lore/a backstory on some of this
11. Changing the info page because I forgot what that says now
Thanks for reading my lil rant, but yeah if you've been following this for a while just know there's gonna be some changes and shit like that, I might as well archive this and make a whole other story.
In fact, I did do just that
Go check it out :)
