*Ryan walks in from getting sonic*
Kenny: is that a cherry limeade slushie in your pants or are you just happy to see me?
Ryan: *giggles* my parents are coming over tonight for dinner and you can't make jokes like that around them
Kenny: don't worry bbg I won't anyways did you get my corn dog?
Ryan: yeah and I got some fruit cause we're fruity
Kenny: FRUITY?? hell yeah
*Ryan hands Kenny his corn dog and he chomps down they throw away the fruit bc they only needed it for the funnys*
Kenny: damn this is bussin
*Ryan's mom calls*
Ryan: hold on I gotta take this
Ryan's mom: oh hello there I can't wait for dinner but I called to ask are you still homo?
Ryan Ugh yes mom
Ryan's mom: I TOLD YOU TO STOP BEING HOMO OR I'M GONNA HAVE TO BEAT IT OUT OF YOU
*Ryan hangs up the phone*
Kenny: hey before they come over wanna go to the bed room for some sexy wexy time
Ryan: fuck yeah I've been horny all day
*They go to the bed room Ryan slams Kenny onto the bed and begins taking off his shirt*
Kenny: oh my god what are you gonna do to me? *He says while striping himself*
Ryan: shut the fuck up kitten *takes off his pants and boxers revealing his massive 12in penis*
Kenny: *strokes Ryan's alpha muscles* damn it feels like titanium
Ryan: yeah I'm glad you like my pecs kitten now *flips him over and spreads his massive asscheeks* it's time to get dirty
Kenny: oh fuck yeah I love getting dirty with you
Ryan: *slides his massive dick inside of Kenny's sweaty asshole* you like that?
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Review from Kenny from this exact story:
2/10
It was illiterate and the spelling and grammar was absolute shit water.
It had no plot and it is just like any fan fiction that shows only the sex and how it began and how it went, still ass.
No visual words of like simple details like my ass cheeks clapping or balls smacking against dick. There was nothing. These are just words like, "What" They're plain and dry as hell and the person writing it obviously wrote it because the only reason is they're horny and don't give good story telling.
