Scripts and Editing

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Today was fun

Yesterday we all prepared scripts

And the teacher said mine was too complex but she really liked my characters :D

I named them Tayvin and Trixie

So the story was that Tayvin's parents went missing in Greece

And Tayvin went to Greece to find them

Trixie, Tayvin's best friend, follows and helps Tayvin

So there's a lot of action and drama

And Trixie is a lesbian, and she likes Tayvin

So it's like a mix of love and action

But my teacher said it was like 2 seperate plots in one and she really liked them

So for 1 and a half hour, we discussed ways we can decomplicate my story

And there was a scene when Tayvin gets into a fight at the bar

They were at the bar to get info about Tayvin's parents

And then a glass nearly hits Trixie's head
So Tayvin gets angry and punches the guy

And then the pub turns into chaos

Then Trixie takes a gun and shoots the ceiling to calm then down

And then the police come and Tayvin escapes with Trixie

And then at the 5 minute break I told them that I thought of this story in less that 30 minutes

The teacher and one student were like WATTTT

THEIR FACES WERE SO HILARIOUS

I LAUGHED SO DAM HARD AT THEIR REACTIONS

And the student was older than me :P

He was like "ARE YOU FRICKIN SERIOUS?" And I was like "yeah :P" and he was like "Wow."

Lol :P

And then one guy made a story when evrryone just dies one by one

And the last remaining guy wants to die

And then every 10 minutes an old guy pops out of nowhere and says "Someone is going to die" and it's always after someone dies

XD LOL

And all of the series books are under editing

I will be correcting grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, etc

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