Star wars New Age (New Preview/ Revised Version)

Chapter 0 : Prologue

In space a giant ship loomed over tatooine a desert planet, but far away enough it wouldn't appear in the atmosphere, a shuttle flew out of the star destroyer out of the main hangar and slowly flew towards tatooine

Tatooine

Kurt was sitting on a bench facing the two suns one red and one yellow and the never ending sand with occasionally bumps and the large mountains straight and stretching up at the sky with no limit staring up at the sky seeing the orange and yellow-ish color of the sky and seeing shiny star’s start to appear and occasional ships fly by as distant shadows, moments later he heard a door open behind him and saw his Aunt come over to him carrying a tray with two cups.
  “When are you two gonna go to the pod race?” She asked, offering one of the two drinks.
  “I don't know, is he gonna be home soon?” Kurt said grabbing on of the Cups
  “Well, as long as he doesn't get caught and questioned by the empire, then he should be home any moment and thank our lucky stars the Empire Xll ain't here” She said walking away. Kurt heard the door open and shut behind him he continued to look at the desert he saw occasional womp rats run across the plains, then after moments passed there was a loud rumble around him, he looked around him and checked on the side of the house and saw a gray rectangular ship with blue lights on the side he saw, he noticed a symbol in the middle of the ship, it was a weird symbol it didn't look like anything the normal empire would use, before he analyzed it further it disappeared out of his view and saw that it was heading towards the center of Mos Eisley his hometown.

The ship

Two rows of mysterious figures were lined up perfectly in order, all wearing the same black cloak with their hoods on, not revealing their faces, with zippers that reached down to their legs with matching black pants and black boots with red on the bottoms but all had different white arm bands all displaying different numbers l - Xll. The room was lit with a forgettable blue it was the color of the sea but much lighter and more darker than any other color of blue there 4 other people their though they didn't have Cloaks they had black armor and thick shoulder pads on their right shoulder they had blaster holding it with both hands, with the same symbol that was on the shuttle printed on their chest plate, all sharing the same expression on their helmet, there was a window on both sides revealing the outside one of the ship, Number 6 looked and saw the begins of the town and hit the glass and it echoed to the cockpit eventually the ship slowed down and eventually came to a halt and everyone in the ship shifted a little but not a lot a couple of them looked out the window and saw people walking around the ship.
  “You think it's still here?” Number 10 said, there was a short pause
  “Well, Jackal thinks so and we have to follow orders” Number 1 said answering Number 10’s Question
  “Roger that” Number 10 said in a not so serious tone
He saw number 1 turn her head to his direction, he couldn't see her face but he knew it was not at all satisfied with his comment she turned her head around and they all watched as the wall in front of them slowly go forward

Mos Eisley

People around watched as a transporter door slowly as air hissed while it opened towards them as a ramp, they didn't see it for long a symbol that looked familiar, It eventually stopped when it hit the sand and people around the transporter mutter but didn't speak up or nothing and they saw smoke inside they couldn't see inside but knew someone was inside, the smoke cleared up a little and they could make out a figure or two. Then sooner than later they saw another one and more come out of the same shadowy figure then two people with black armor marched down the ramp with their weapons pointed up with both hand like on the transporter, Then a person with a dark cloak walked down right after,  then another one came then all of them spreaded out across the bottom part of the ramp, all in a line with Number 5 almost in the middle, There was murmur in the crowd of people
  “We are the empire!” Number 9 Spoke after a long silence after they came off the transporter
  “Of course, you knew that! Most of you people here are wondering why we are here!” She yelled again “We are going to be here as long as we need to, until we find the last of the Jedi '' She yelled. There was a much louder murmur, until someone spoke up
  “There's no Jedi all the way out here there's nothing but desert, no Jedi would be here” Someone said, there was a pause
  “Then why would we be here?” Number 4 spoke up, The others looked over at him
  “Number 4, were you requested to speak?” Number 9 said looking over at Number 4
  “*Sigh* No ma'am” He said in a dishonored tone
  “Then don't speak unless spoken to” Number 9 said, She looked away from Number 4 “Now we'll be watching unless someone confesses but until then” She said, she signaled the pilot to leave “We are staying” She said
All of them took one step forward and before long the shuttle ramp reversed back and closed behind the Xll
  “So go on with your lives, with us breathing down your shoulders, until… Someone breaks”
After that Both of the people in Black armor hand gestured forwards with a fist leaving one hand on the weapon, then placed it back then everyone who was in the crowd dispersed walking around the Xll
  “Someone will break they always do” Number 9 said under her breath