raataan lambiyan

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✓ not a full fledged detailed shot but some parts of my imagination containing only visuals or scenes
✓ first time writing so please don't judge but feedback is surely welcomed
✓ highly inspired from existing authors on Wattpad

Backdrop
4 years after the show ended shakhi are living peacefully with sabherwal family
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Teri meri gallan ho gayi mash-hoor
Kar na kabhi tu mujhe nazron se door
Kithe chaliye tu kithe chaliye
Tu kithe chaliye kithe chaliye

Shaurya and anokhi took blessings from the family members and headed towards the car to start their journey

Jaan'da ae dil yeh to jaandi ae tu
Tere bina main na rahun mere bina tu
Kithe chaliye tu kithe chaliye
Tu kithe chaliye chal chaliye

Much in love the love birds reached there destination and shaurya forwarded his hand to heavily pregnant anokhi she lovingly held his hand and held her baby bump from the other hand

Kaatun kaise raataan oh sawre
Jiya nahi jaata sun bawre
Ke raataan lambiyan re
Kate tere sangeya sangeya re
Ke raataan lambiyan re
Kate tere sangeya sangeya re

Her eyes filled up recalling all the memories she spent there as they rang the bell of her parents home to surprise them by their impromptu visit
Her mother opened the door much surprised seeing her pregnant daughter ( not that she didn't knew about her pregnancy but she was not aware of their surprise arrival during her 2nd tremester )

Cham cham cham ambran de taare
Kehnde ne sajna
Tu hi chann mere is dil da
Mann lai ve sajna

Both entered her kapurthala's childhood house holding hands together to break out a new exciting news to her parents seeing shaurya helping anokhi even to walk and take a small step rama's eyes welled up seeing her daughter happy and being cared ... She called Ramesh and they welcomed the couple at the home

Tere bina mera hove na ghuzara
Chhad ke na jaavi mainu
Tu hi hai sahara
Kaatun kaise raataan oh sawre
Jiya nahi jaata sun bawre

They all sat together and talked together about various subjects and Rama served food to them ... shaurya gave anokhi medicine just before eating food they all ate food

Ke raataan lambiyan re
Kate tere sangeya sangeya re
Ke raataan lambiyan re
Kate tere sangeya sangeya re

They video called babli who was now happily married to ahir and made her part of their celebration then anokhi told the news
that shakhi was going to become parents of TWINS
And then shaurya opened the news article from renowned international page and showed them to Rama and Ramesh which featured anokhi's article about women empowerment and news that anokhi won 1st price in a very famous online article writing competition of a famous international college
Happiness overflowed in the atmosphere as anokhi's parents came to know about her personal happiness and professional excellence they hugged the couple and congratulated them

Teri meri gallan ho gayi mash-hoor
Kar na kabhi tu mujhe nazron se door
Pichhe chaliye tere pichhe chaliye
Tere pichhe chaliye

They cutted the cake of celebrations and shared their joy with each other sharing a family hug together

Jaanda ae dil yeh to jaandi ae tu
Tere bina main na rahun mere bina tu
Kithe chaliye tu kithe chaliye
Tu kithe chaliye kithe chaliye

Anokhi saw shaurya laughing with her parents and talking to them
A feeling of proudness washed her over as she recalled the tough,rigid ,rude shaurya she met and now who transformed to a doting husband , a future best father and a supporting husband
Journey of shakhi had lots of leaps and bounds they both transformed to good and become best of themselves together stiil exploring more new sides of each other every new day the couple which fought every day entered to best phase of their life ( what great metamorphosis process they had undergone)

Kaatun kaise raataan oh sawre
Jiya nahi jaata sun bawre
Ke raataan lambiyan re
Kate tere sangeya sangeya re
Ke raataan lambiyan re
Kate tere sangeya sangeya re

They left from there after spending a lot more Family time together knowing that this is the last time before delivery that anokhi is visiting her house and after delivery she will not get much time either
Not knowing where the future will take them
(I mostly imagine shakhi happy with their family so here I wanted to add moments with anokhi's family

That's it
My take ... I know that it's quite mainstream but just getting my hands on writing
: also song doesn't fit here ik but I wanted to add song
: will try better next time
: constructive criticism and feedback is welcomed
: feel free to give advice i am learning all this by reading your well written stories only

My apologies if you found it boring 🙃

Byee
Have a great day 💗

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