TITLE: Sky Blue
AUTHOR: EssaSerania
GENRE: Romance, Teen Fiction, Fan Fiction
READS: 2.2k
VOTES: 595
PARTS: 17 Parts (15 chapters & 2 author's note)
STATUS: Unfinished (on delay)
COVER: I love the cover's originality. It fits the story title and the character's name. It's very descent, cute and unique. I'd give you 10/10 for that, ha!
MISTAKES: There are some grammatical mistakes, but simply a few. The overall spelling of each chapter is alright. There is no shortcuts or text form words - which I liked. Simply be more detailed and make the chapter length's longer, yeah? 8/10
PLOT: Honestly, I really can't judge you about this part. It's however a bit short for the plot, but, it seems to me that this story will be good and a book worthy one. 8/10
OPINION: Some of the chapters are short. It needs more details, especially the features. For me, a specific place is important, I advise you to append a certain city or country to your story. But it was beneficial and I can still imagine what were you describing.
I love your script. I fell in love with Cash more than the other male character of your script. When will we get some Blue and Haven scene though?
Seriously, I love Arrie and how sweet he is to Haven and how Cash is overly protective for his cousin, but we need - especially me - some more Blue!
Stop making some cliffhanger and update girl! I already miss Haven and Arrie. 8/10
RATE: 34/40
ADVICE: If you need any help with your story, I would gladly help you with it. Shoot me a message anytime!
RECOMMENDATION: If you enjoy reading the works of John Green, Aurora Rose Reynolds and Sarah Dessen, this is the book for you. Read EssaSerania 's work and you won't regret it.
LINK: http://w.tt/1K2Far5
RELEASED: August 2015
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