TITLE: Kiss Me
AUTHOR: BurningFireWithin
GENRE: Fan fiction, romance, mystery
READS: 371
VOTES: 51
PARTS: 11 chapters
STATUS: Unfinished.
COVER: I really didn't like your cover for the story. It's seems like the cover is not related to your title and the plot of your story. 6/10
PLOT: The plot is very good. I liked the idea of how your story is going to be. This is the first time I read a story with a plot like yours, maybe that is the reason that I liked it. I'd give you a 7/10 for that.
MISTAKES: The first mistake that I have notice is, in some chapters of your sentences, it lacks just about words. Some of the chapters are thus short and very confusing because of your point of views of your characters. Also, the places and how the characters talk to other characters are very puzzling. Be more detailed in every chapter. 7/10
OPINION: I liked your story a lot, if only you could just fix the faults. I liked your characters, but it is just so perplexing.
Make the chapters more lengthy and please be more elaborate. I actually liked your story, so please don't waste the opportunity.
Also, include more twist in the story because it seems like, I can anticipate what will happen next and what will the ending be like. 8/10
RATE: 28/40
RECOMMENDATION: If you like the works of Tarryn Fisher and Cora Carmack, this is the story for you.
ADVICE: If you want help with your cover and your story, so I could edit it, I would gladly help you with it. Just shoot me a message anytime!
LINK: http://w.tt/1JX5kIp
RELEASED: August 2015.
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